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3/29/2009 c1 Me
Oh wow. That was so heartbraking. I loved the repeated line 'Slice of bread, slice of knife. I don't care, its not my life.' I loved it. Keep writing and so sorry you had to go through this
6/4/2004 c1 127Eirien
-! I can't find many words to say much about this right now, having gone through the same three things actually. Perhaps it kind of explains why I've felt so drawn to your poetry from the very first poem I read... Anyway, remember what I wrote in that other review on "Her arms, my arms". I have to stop reviewing now, but this certainly isn't the last you've heard from me. ;-)
6/16/2003 c1 79CrimsonCat
omg.. that was.. beautiful. Heart-breakingly beautiful. I love it. I'm adding it to my fav's list - well done. (The emotion is so strong..)

Dai stiho
6/15/2003 c1 29Fuinixe
Excellent flow. It put me close to tears. I'm sorry you've been through this. Keep writing.
6/14/2003 c1 131Nizzles
Wow.

That was awesome. So angry and longing. I loved it.

Thanks for reviewing my peice of crap "Come On Concubine". Keep up the good work, you're a great writer.

**and kill whoever made you mad that you're referring to in the song**
6/13/2003 c1 Marisyle not signed in
I can relate... Nice poem..keep with the writing..
6/13/2003 c1 5Silver Catalyst
OOh, that was so sad. :( But very good; i love emotional poems. Well done. It can't be easy writing about things like this.

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