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1/3/2007 c1 6the sacred night
AA I am hooked! I want so badly to keep reading and finish the whole thing tonight, but it's after midnight and I have a paper due in the morning...

I love how you've introduced us to your fantasy world. You don't drone on and on just describing the world before you even begin the story like some authors do, and you don't rush headlong into the story expecting us to get everything right away like others do. You do just the right amount of explaining so that I understand everything without getting bored. Not once did I say to myself "Get on with it already." What you've done with the world is really original and that combined with your characters grabbed me right away. I adore it.
6/16/2006 c1 1aeskis
I am so tickled. This is such a cute, witty story!

Keep writing,~Winnie
2/5/2006 c6 puppy dog eyes
Ah, Faun was the dominant one, for now anyway. I like it that way. It makes the story more unique.
2/5/2006 c2 puppy dog eyes
Great story so far. i like how Taz and Lin are treating him like a person instead of a thing. It makes the story cuter. I can't wait to read the rest. ^_^.
12/2/2005 c1 Arsenic.Dreams
I really like this story. I am intriqued by the idea that elves were created by magic and technology. Can't wait to read more. Anyways, this weird formatting is a little hard to read.
10/24/2005 c16 Darwin ruler of all
Comments I have for this story are varied and generally ecstatic.

One of the first is that I know have a passionate love for were-cats and elves ( well, more passionate than before).

Another is, wow, you really balanced the angst, fluff, violence and sex perfectly in this one. I'll admit to being dubious on the bestiality-ish scene, but you kept it relatively tasteful. So, very well coordinated story.

The last comment is that I must now read all your work in a scary, stalkerish fashion. I'll try to drop reviews as I hop along.
9/19/2005 c16 9Silver Daratraz
I simply loved this story. good work darling.
5/6/2005 c16 squirrel
Yay for happy endings! i want a cat with bat wings!
11/8/2004 c16 Briel
I love you. It's offical. That was a wonderful chapter. It even involved catman/man sex. Just so you know you can expect me to be stalking you (non-RL to reassure) for the rest of your life.
-psuedoconstructive things to follow
Do you have a spellchecker? Because there are some pretty good mistakes. For instance Armageddon = Armageddin which just struck me as funny. There there was dual vs duel. wait...that was another story. Anyway, also this might just be quick typing on your part but...
cat's=possesive
cats=plural
to=I'm going to the store
too=also
your=possesive
you're= you are
(obviously you probably know this. don't get too angry these are just the things that routinely annoy me in any bit of writing)
10/28/2004 c16 6Goldensong
Yay you! This is so good! I love it! Lin and Faun are just the most adorable, fluffy couple ever! I have no objections to Taz and Tsin either... I like your version of elves and the whole cat thing. It's all so cool!
8/28/2004 c9 Cannibalistic Smurf
a spifftastic job yet again! gah, I'm starting to run out of things to say in these reviews without repeating myself...
8/27/2004 c8 Cannibalistic Smurf
yes lin! embrase your inner slut! lol, I love you sb1, your sex scenes fill me with glee ^_^
8/27/2004 c7 Cannibalistic Smurf
"are there gonna be tests? grades? this could get sticky..."
ah, i love it! and w00t to sex!
though I feel sad for faun at the end of the chappy (I mean the way he feels, not the fact that he's getting freedom...)
8/27/2004 c6 Cannibalistic Smurf
wow, thats a lot of different meanings for hair 0_0
well, this chappys absolutely spiffing darling!
8/27/2004 c5 Cannibalistic Smurf
aw, this this one I didn't know who to feel sorry for MORE,faun or lin...
again, your talent stuns me, and I must continue...
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