
8/26/2003 c1
127godawful teen-angst poetry
I think I have yet to read a haiku of yours that did not simultaneously make me guilty for posting the crap I call poetry and feel this extreme awe for your talent. Great job.

I think I have yet to read a haiku of yours that did not simultaneously make me guilty for posting the crap I call poetry and feel this extreme awe for your talent. Great job.
8/9/2003 c1
210Kelpylion
Oh my, the structure of this poem is VERY dramatic, and you chose your words perfectly-excellent piece.

Oh my, the structure of this poem is VERY dramatic, and you chose your words perfectly-excellent piece.
7/30/2003 c1
9Modussa
i've never understood this stuff...too short...but after looking at other reviews, you seem to have quite a talent...*frowns* im so confused

i've never understood this stuff...too short...but after looking at other reviews, you seem to have quite a talent...*frowns* im so confused
7/17/2003 c1
80Plato's Optic Runaway
great job! i love people who can do incredible haikus. i love it. ^^ and thanks for reviewing me.

great job! i love people who can do incredible haikus. i love it. ^^ and thanks for reviewing me.
7/13/2003 c1
36obsidian katana
wonderful piece! well written, flows nicely, great word usage, i like it. great job! keep on writing!

wonderful piece! well written, flows nicely, great word usage, i like it. great job! keep on writing!
7/5/2003 c1 deaths counterfeit
you make paper planes sound so beautiful and un earthly, like a tresure to be loved forever. astoundingly beautiful, kudos
you make paper planes sound so beautiful and un earthly, like a tresure to be loved forever. astoundingly beautiful, kudos
6/25/2003 c1
76CoolBeans18s
Wow! This is an amazing poem! I love making paper planes, but my dog chews up any she can get to first!
~ CoolBean18s

Wow! This is an amazing poem! I love making paper planes, but my dog chews up any she can get to first!
~ CoolBean18s
6/22/2003 c1
212VOIDKing Ki
Short, sweet and beautiful. So few words and yet, so much meaning. Keep writing!

Short, sweet and beautiful. So few words and yet, so much meaning. Keep writing!