for Paper Planes6/20/2003 c1 
96Mitsunaga
Wonderful
-PS Your bio says im a girl, im not, but don't feel bad i think its hillarious
96MitsunagaWonderful
-PS Your bio says im a girl, im not, but don't feel bad i think its hillarious
6/20/2003 c1 35Mime
Another masterpiece you've written. I like the first line the best; the one about the sky. It makes me think of the very strange weather we've been having lately. Beautiful job!
35MimeAnother masterpiece you've written. I like the first line the best; the one about the sky. It makes me think of the very strange weather we've been having lately. Beautiful job!
6/19/2003 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
I love the contrast you have in this poem. You make the paper plane sound so fierce and growly, like a predator stalking the air. Wonderful job! Thanks for the review!
12All Mighty TerrestrialI love the contrast you have in this poem. You make the paper plane sound so fierce and growly, like a predator stalking the air. Wonderful job! Thanks for the review!
6/15/2003 c1 greenfroggies
I cant help wandering what the inspiration for that was. A good poem and excelently written. Soz this review was so late, i havent been keeping up eith my emails
I cant help wandering what the inspiration for that was. A good poem and excelently written. Soz this review was so late, i havent been keeping up eith my emails
6/15/2003 c1 8glitterjewele
fantastic! i got this image of the blue angels while i read it, it was really cool. :P my favorite bit was 'reverie prowling' - so original and intriguing! also, liked how you put "flew" between ~s. another great haiku! you're so very talented. :)
8glitterjewelefantastic! i got this image of the blue angels while i read it, it was really cool. :P my favorite bit was 'reverie prowling' - so original and intriguing! also, liked how you put "flew" between ~s. another great haiku! you're so very talented. :)
6/14/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
This was great, I loved the use of "gorgeously". Good work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenThis was great, I loved the use of "gorgeously". Good work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
6/13/2003 c1 Needa S
Wow...Thumbs-up ..You are an excellent poet. Thank-you for all your kind reviews. *Hugs*
Wow...Thumbs-up ..You are an excellent poet. Thank-you for all your kind reviews. *Hugs*
6/13/2003 c1 The Black Rider
Another lovely and heartwarming piece by you. This is The Black Rider, BTW, in case you didn't know. I absolutely love your poems.
Another lovely and heartwarming piece by you. This is The Black Rider, BTW, in case you didn't know. I absolutely love your poems.