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6/13/2003 c1 267Lady B.V Rose
cute in its own crazy way *starts dancing to Ingnition* *gets stared at* um yeah...

@-'-,- a bloodstained rose~
6/13/2003 c1 1Jimmy Jazz
Yeah! Awesome! I love making paper planes. *whispers* I have a confession. I can't make paper planes, my friends make them... AND THEN I STEAL THEM, MWAHAHAHA!

Soz, lol. Great haiku anyway.
6/13/2003 c1 20Deadwind
Wow, that's a really beautiful cut haiku. Good job!
6/13/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Magnificent work. This was really beautiful.

~Heart of the Sword
6/13/2003 c1 Reina-chan
Remind me so much of saiyuki...

Very beautifully written.
6/13/2003 c1 34Children of the Root
Great haiku! I like the second line too. It really gives you a good picture in your mind.

Although, my paper planes never seemed to fly. Well, not unless you count going in the air for about 2 feet and falling straight down to the ground. Not much of a flight. :-)
6/13/2003 c1 51Lieschen
Beautiful...loved the line "reverie prowling" it just sounded so good. Great writing !

ELise
6/13/2003 c1 89Stoffpferd
Truly beautiful! I really like it!

~Stoffpferd~
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