5/29/2012 c1 18Bushwah
Someone is looking in the mirror and almost commits suicide but... misses.

1/29/2005 c1 Laura Barton
Understand I did. I particularly like the last line of this poem. I'm not sure why, but I really do.

1/29/2005 c1 190apromptedpoet
That's awesome..

You're looking in the mirror.

Wow.

I don't even really have the words for this one. It's just so unexplainable...

Let's just say this: On a scale of 1 to 10 I'd rate this a damn 10 (if that's even a number! :P)

Great job Ian. Going on my faves for sure.

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting

6/15/2003 c1 8angeldust-09
YAY i got it

i really liked it

its really good

bai baiz

6/13/2003 c1 19IcyFlame
Very nice, very nice. Interesting take on the subject, I like your presentation. I hadn't expected to like this, just because it has a rhyme scheme, but you pulled it off very well. Just a few errors:

ln 4, "weezing" should be "wheezing"

ln 9, "your" should be "you're"

ln 9, "led" should be "lead"

Also, you should delete the commas in lines 9-11, it'll flow better that way. I enjoyed this very much, keep writing!