for One Person
71/29/2005 c1 Laura Barton
Honestly, it's rather confusing and it almost seems like a rant of sorts. There are a few minor spelling errors. And, though it may seem irrelivant, schizophrenia is more than just a split personality disorder. It also has to do with withdrawl from reality, hallucinations and possibly more (I'm not sure). You may have already been aware of that, but the way you are presenting it in your 'story', it seems like you think it's just the split persona thing.
Honestly, it's rather confusing and it almost seems like a rant of sorts. There are a few minor spelling errors. And, though it may seem irrelivant, schizophrenia is more than just a split personality disorder. It also has to do with withdrawl from reality, hallucinations and possibly more (I'm not sure). You may have already been aware of that, but the way you are presenting it in your 'story', it seems like you think it's just the split persona thing.
8/24/2003 c1 Clarence Boddicker
Ian you are one fuckin crazy bastard. Go take some pills! That's right, I know your name so maybe i AM telepathic! Or maybe I'm Jeff...ops. No I'm not...
Ian you are one fuckin crazy bastard. Go take some pills! That's right, I know your name so maybe i AM telepathic! Or maybe I'm Jeff...ops. No I'm not...