for Convince Me10/7/2012 c3 
6magnanimousSquirrel
I am reviewing! Why you no update this? The concept is interesting.
6magnanimousSquirrelI am reviewing! Why you no update this? The concept is interesting.
8/2/2006 c3 4Right or Ryn
I don't know if this story is officialy dead or not, but if its not dead, just in a coma or something, revive it. I'll read it. Interesting plot. But it does seem that when you meet your soulmate in the story that its an uncomfortable feeling, make you feel sick in a bad way. W/E. Keep writing.
4Right or RynI don't know if this story is officialy dead or not, but if its not dead, just in a coma or something, revive it. I'll read it. Interesting plot. But it does seem that when you meet your soulmate in the story that its an uncomfortable feeling, make you feel sick in a bad way. W/E. Keep writing.
2/10/2006 c3 64Arwen Starfire
really good. check you Spanish words in a Spanish/English dictionary though, because I noticed you wrote "mejo", and it is actually spelled "mijo". "A" makes an "ah" sound, "E" makes "eh", "I" makes "ee", "O" makes "oh", and "U" makes "oo". Just as a start for the vowels. l Hope that helps. Continue with this story, it is really good, and like I said before, it is a unique concept.
64Arwen Starfirereally good. check you Spanish words in a Spanish/English dictionary though, because I noticed you wrote "mejo", and it is actually spelled "mijo". "A" makes an "ah" sound, "E" makes "eh", "I" makes "ee", "O" makes "oh", and "U" makes "oo". Just as a start for the vowels. l Hope that helps. Continue with this story, it is really good, and like I said before, it is a unique concept.
2/10/2006 c1 Arwen Starfire
awesome, like your soul mate concept. very realistic morning for claire, no fluff. I like it! Keep going.
awesome, like your soul mate concept. very realistic morning for claire, no fluff. I like it! Keep going.
11/22/2005 c3 21insane in the brain
*falls off chair laughing then curshes poor kitty* . he pushed me! *jabs finger randomly* yeah you! don't you walk away from me! *mumbles*
21insane in the brain*falls off chair laughing then curshes poor kitty* . he pushed me! *jabs finger randomly* yeah you! don't you walk away from me! *mumbles*
9/19/2005 c3 5Cerridwen 69
interesting...i got kinda confused with the pov thing, it took me a while to figure out whose's head i was in...but i like this story...
5Cerridwen 69interesting...i got kinda confused with the pov thing, it took me a while to figure out whose's head i was in...but i like this story...
8/16/2005 c3 understate it
review, gosh darn? Why have an ad thingy if you never review!
review, gosh darn? Why have an ad thingy if you never review!
6/23/2005 c3 10satinsmoke
haha, i LOVE your twist on soul-mates. thats so creative...i agree with claire though. i wouldn't want to have some people find my soul-mate for me - i'd want to meet him by accident, or destiny, whatever it may be :).
update soon please.
10satinsmokehaha, i LOVE your twist on soul-mates. thats so creative...i agree with claire though. i wouldn't want to have some people find my soul-mate for me - i'd want to meet him by accident, or destiny, whatever it may be :).
update soon please.
3/24/2005 c1 3Gonzogrig
alright, if you ever return to your account again, I'd like you to know I feel completely ripped off. You haven't updated this story since 2003! not fair at all
3Gonzogrigalright, if you ever return to your account again, I'd like you to know I feel completely ripped off. You haven't updated this story since 2003! not fair at all
3/24/2005 c3 Gonzogrig
This is a great concept, plus there's the added bonus that you actually know how to write! Love the style, the plot is great, especially since it's relaxed but still defined enough to recognize. And the title is excellent. This story has got me hook, line and sinker, keep it up and update soon!
This is a great concept, plus there's the added bonus that you actually know how to write! Love the style, the plot is great, especially since it's relaxed but still defined enough to recognize. And the title is excellent. This story has got me hook, line and sinker, keep it up and update soon!
12/29/2004 c3 LOstMYmaYO
Haha, I thoroughly enjoyed the ending of that last chapter. This is a pretty good story, and I like how Gabby mixes in some spanish words. But, I don't know about the 'Soul Mate Symptoms'. They seem a bit...over the top. I dunno, extreme dizziness and nausea? I'm sorry, but that kinda seems a bit much to me. Otherwise, I like this story, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops. Update soon!
~Jme~
Haha, I thoroughly enjoyed the ending of that last chapter. This is a pretty good story, and I like how Gabby mixes in some spanish words. But, I don't know about the 'Soul Mate Symptoms'. They seem a bit...over the top. I dunno, extreme dizziness and nausea? I'm sorry, but that kinda seems a bit much to me. Otherwise, I like this story, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops. Update soon!
~Jme~