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3/3/2004 c12 DMK
Wow, I think there was a whole like 7 lines here I didn't read! LOL, that's ok, it was still pretty good and I kept up with it in our little IM's.

Woo-hoo! An update! Yay...
2/20/2004 c12 9Magentian
That's all? *blinks sadly* Aww. 'Twas very funny, though. Now I have nothing to do. Perhaps counting toes is an option. *glances around the empty library and pulls off her shoe*
2/18/2004 c12 12RustPoisonedBlade
heh heh,for being dry on inspiration,that's pretty good. Hope you get it back soon!
2/18/2004 c12 Esliim Karnth
Holy crap, Zippstah. That ending made me laugh. Not just smile, or be slightly amused. Laugh. And get wierd looks from my family.
Too...short...of...a...chapter...
2/18/2004 c12 6Ahrar Nighthammer
Umm...
Well, uh...
Ok, Zippy... You know I love you, sweetheart, but... um...
This chapter...
Umm...
...
It vexes me. I'm terribly vexed.
Ok, this is how it is. I have been WAITING and WAITING for this chapter to come for quite a long time, so I AM terribly excited that you are getting the ball rolling, so to speak, on this again.
However.
It seems... I dunno... a little forced. Kinda like the inspiration just wasn't coming as fast. It had some funny points, but the humor seemed as if you had to work hard to make it funny, it didn't seem to just flow out in it's delicious randomness like in the previous chapters. Also, this was kinda short, which ALSO gave me the impression that this is only here because you felt obligated to put something up here.
Don't feel obligated to turn in something you aren't TOTALLY satisfied with. It's ok, just keep in mind that this isn't a race. It's creative.
That said (I yelled at you. Sorry...) I really am proud of you for getting this through. I know how hard it can be.
Good job.
Keep this up.
I g2g.
Cya
_Ahrar
2/17/2004 c12 Ze one and only Drunken Monkey King
Zippy, you bwitch! (And don't you dare call me a bwastard) I had already read about half of that and this is all I get! I was expecting a good 15-20 min. read or something, not this little chapter! I'm gonna cry! *sniffle* Poo-head.

(Damn right. I said poo-head.)
2/13/2004 c1 Fragemented Skye
i've only read up to chapter 5(and you know it..hehe...)er..um...yeah...like i said this is just cool..wonderful..and alota other adjectives that i cant think of right now which praise this um...story!..i could go on and on...but i'll stop now...(until i get the sudden urge to read more...)
1/22/2004 c4 Eckrice
This is really good stuff.
Very misterious...
Im betting that Strydda's mom is Rhyst's mom but that is most likely wrong.
You write really good fantasy and romance. That is what makes this story so good.
Keep writing
-Eckrice
12/5/2003 c11 5Masked Coconut
No, it wasn't corny! Okay. Maybe a little... but good corn. Like, popcorn corn. No, that would mean it's fluffy, and buttery, and salty, and... er, never mind. Good chapterness! *cackles* Ohh, I must read more of this soon, or my head will go 'poofsplishsplot wheBANG!' all over the computer.
Which may be a plus to some people...
Anyways, awesome stuff.
12/5/2003 c8 Masked Coconut
I feel so bad that I haven't reviewed yet... been too involved in reading to stop so far. I'll tear myself away for now to type this, though it pains me...
Werr, I love this story! *Randomly hugs author* I know, Quell is a dork... but he's great. Also like Strydda. I'm going to be walking around forever yelling, "Holy cheese!" Yes, we share the small-attention-span whatsit. Must... read... more... *twitch* AWAY!
12/4/2003 c3 Eckrice
Awesome stuff Zippy. I think that the fight with the sewer dragon was a little bit too short. I still like Strydda. You mentioned that this was slightly D&D based? Cool stuff. anywhewt. I got to read the next chappie. Yoy.
May your onions stay sweet,
-Eckrice
11/30/2003 c5 4SrenRok
Id like to vote if it isnt too late... Strydda is my favorite, go stickyfingers!
Ackk, you make the ending of this chapter really really interesting...
Well I best get back to reading...
~-SR-~
11/28/2003 c4 SrenRok
I love the symbolism you used with the food. Well I gotsta get back to reading :D...
-~SR~-
11/28/2003 c1 SrenRok
nice flipping nice.
I must say these lines were very amusing.
"Planes?" Quell furrowed his brow. "Like, airplanes?"
"No! This isn't some fantasy book, Quell! There's no such thing as an airplane!" After a moment, the mage composed himself. "Planes, as in, other dimensions. Like where the gods live."
Over all very nice and I cant wait to read more of it.
-~SR~-
11/27/2003 c1 12RustPoisonedBlade
Hahahahahahahaha! I love it! that was hillarious(sp)!
"Mage things..."...I love that line.Awsome story...gonna read more!
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