for Fallen8/28/2005 c5 
5blackrose113
wow! i really love this story! i think the characters and the plot are really interesting. there were no gramatical errors except toat the past tense of 'drag' is 'dragged' not 'drug', and i hope you update soon!
5blackrose113wow! i really love this story! i think the characters and the plot are really interesting. there were no gramatical errors except toat the past tense of 'drag' is 'dragged' not 'drug', and i hope you update soon!
4/29/2005 c5 31Living in a story called life
i liked ur story it was very nice and interesting great job
31Living in a story called lifei liked ur story it was very nice and interesting great job
12/19/2004 c5 eshie
Hey ... wow. That's all I can say. Heh, actually, there is more that i can say. I really like the way you started this fic off - and it doesn't matter that you didn't get into the story right at the beginning, since the character introductions were really good, and they DID help with the story. I know what you mean when you said that you love developing and introducing your characters - I feel the same.
The story line's interesting too ... and I really hope that you update soon. I want to know why Demons would want to summon ordinary humans - with great talent - AND call them 'warriors.'
Please update soon! And keep up with the great work ^_^
Hey ... wow. That's all I can say. Heh, actually, there is more that i can say. I really like the way you started this fic off - and it doesn't matter that you didn't get into the story right at the beginning, since the character introductions were really good, and they DID help with the story. I know what you mean when you said that you love developing and introducing your characters - I feel the same.
The story line's interesting too ... and I really hope that you update soon. I want to know why Demons would want to summon ordinary humans - with great talent - AND call them 'warriors.'
Please update soon! And keep up with the great work ^_^
7/22/2004 c5 2Sakura Kuonji
Ooh..wow..demons and martial arts and things..FUN. ^_^ I do hope you continue this, and maybe I'll actually check my email every once in a while to see if you've updated. Or I could, y'know, actually log in once a year or something. Love the characters, love the descriptions and stuff, love the story! Keep up the good work!
2Sakura KuonjiOoh..wow..demons and martial arts and things..FUN. ^_^ I do hope you continue this, and maybe I'll actually check my email every once in a while to see if you've updated. Or I could, y'know, actually log in once a year or something. Love the characters, love the descriptions and stuff, love the story! Keep up the good work!
5/23/2004 c5 9alionya
This is a really great story. I love how your charachters interact with each other. How do they know each other though. I guess i'll have to wait ot find out right. But not to long i hope.
9alionyaThis is a really great story. I love how your charachters interact with each other. How do they know each other though. I guess i'll have to wait ot find out right. But not to long i hope.
5/19/2004 c4 1Cyphren
che... got all this way and still no development of story. On the plus side... all four characters are impressive.
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next time... chapter one... so, i suppose that means it'll be like... three months before the next chapter?... judging from these four and its publish date.
- Cypher-Khan
1Cyphrenche... got all this way and still no development of story. On the plus side... all four characters are impressive.
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next time... chapter one... so, i suppose that means it'll be like... three months before the next chapter?... judging from these four and its publish date.
- Cypher-Khan
5/19/2004 c3 Cyphren
New character... Yay.
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She uses a kodachi, huzzah, my new favourite. If she has a second one that will be so cool. Gotta love twin kodachi.
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Starting to desire reason behind abductions of characters.
-Cypher-Khan
New character... Yay.
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She uses a kodachi, huzzah, my new favourite. If she has a second one that will be so cool. Gotta love twin kodachi.
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Starting to desire reason behind abductions of characters.
-Cypher-Khan
5/19/2004 c2 Cyphren
Ha, dont know how you cant like this guy. Hes awesome, a very different kind of character than Shinzou tho. Still, he's got nothing but class.
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No complaints
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Moving on...
- Cypher-Khan
Ha, dont know how you cant like this guy. Hes awesome, a very different kind of character than Shinzou tho. Still, he's got nothing but class.
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No complaints
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Moving on...
- Cypher-Khan
5/19/2004 c1 Cyphren
Seeing as how you are evil, and I want the fifth chapter of 49 Days...
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Yay, more Shinzou... well, the wraith was a bit useless. But was a well written fight.
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Not too much else to say right now as not too much has occured.
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I shall procede.
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Cypher-Khan
Seeing as how you are evil, and I want the fifth chapter of 49 Days...
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Yay, more Shinzou... well, the wraith was a bit useless. But was a well written fight.
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Not too much else to say right now as not too much has occured.
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I shall procede.
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Cypher-Khan
5/19/2004 c4 2IvoryFrost
Nice chapter. It's about time someone sent one of those dumb wraiths to hell, but what's gonna happen next? You have to update!
2IvoryFrostNice chapter. It's about time someone sent one of those dumb wraiths to hell, but what's gonna happen next? You have to update!
3/24/2004 c2 2Taill
OOh, Kigai sounds cool. I wonder what the stranger wants with him and Shinzou? Well, I'll be sure to read the next chapter soon...keep up with your great work ^^
2TaillOOh, Kigai sounds cool. I wonder what the stranger wants with him and Shinzou? Well, I'll be sure to read the next chapter soon...keep up with your great work ^^
3/24/2004 c1 Taill
Wow...very well presented and written! I REALLY like your story so far, and Shinzou is so cool ^^ I can't wait to read on, but unfortunatly I'm in japanese class right now and if my sensei catches me I am gonna be killed ^_^' hahaha...
GREAT WORK!
Wow...very well presented and written! I REALLY like your story so far, and Shinzou is so cool ^^ I can't wait to read on, but unfortunatly I'm in japanese class right now and if my sensei catches me I am gonna be killed ^_^' hahaha...
GREAT WORK!