for Vials of Blood12/5/2010 c20 WishBlade
Wasn't it Angelina Jolie and her first husband that wore vials of blood at their wedding? I always thought that was rather bizarre, but the way you wrote such an amazing story based on that is just...well, amazing =]
Wasn't it Angelina Jolie and her first husband that wore vials of blood at their wedding? I always thought that was rather bizarre, but the way you wrote such an amazing story based on that is just...well, amazing =]
12/5/2010 c15 WishBlade
The alarm clock part had me freaked out before I realized it was, well, an alarm clock. But the ending? Yeah, that was creepy. Loved this chapter! =]
The alarm clock part had me freaked out before I realized it was, well, an alarm clock. But the ending? Yeah, that was creepy. Loved this chapter! =]
12/5/2010 c14 WishBlade
Is Weston the killer? Cause he's damn creepy, and getting his grubby fingerprints all over the crime scene. And didn't he draw the sketch as well as show up where he wasn't supposed to be right after the chase? Well, I'm going to finish the story now so I can find out =] Awesome chapter once again!
Is Weston the killer? Cause he's damn creepy, and getting his grubby fingerprints all over the crime scene. And didn't he draw the sketch as well as show up where he wasn't supposed to be right after the chase? Well, I'm going to finish the story now so I can find out =] Awesome chapter once again!
12/5/2010 c13 WishBlade
Shoot, the end was creepy. But the argument between Faith and Tyler...hilarious! =]
Shoot, the end was creepy. But the argument between Faith and Tyler...hilarious! =]
12/5/2010 c12 WishBlade
This is such an amazing story! And the serial killer...yeah, he sounded pretty creepy and deranged-but I suppose you're right, serial killers' minds are undoubtedly filled with perversion and derangement. I'm going to end my review here, because I seriously can't wait to read the next chapter! =]
This is such an amazing story! And the serial killer...yeah, he sounded pretty creepy and deranged-but I suppose you're right, serial killers' minds are undoubtedly filled with perversion and derangement. I'm going to end my review here, because I seriously can't wait to read the next chapter! =]
12/5/2010 c8 WishBlade
I really really really enjoyed this chapter-the pancakes scene at the beginning had me smiling like an idiot, and I honestly don't think I stopped grinning once while reading =]
I really really really enjoyed this chapter-the pancakes scene at the beginning had me smiling like an idiot, and I honestly don't think I stopped grinning once while reading =]
12/5/2010 c6 WishBlade
"Faith was a firm believer that lying by omission was not really lying at all."
I don't know why but I found that line beyond hilarious =] And the characters are awesome! And the suspense is amazing as well =]
"Faith was a firm believer that lying by omission was not really lying at all."
I don't know why but I found that line beyond hilarious =] And the characters are awesome! And the suspense is amazing as well =]
12/5/2010 c1 WishBlade
All of your stories are just amazing! I already red Blood Red Roses, so I'm reading them out of order, but eh. As for the prologue, I think the length was perfect, and I am most definitely NOT bored to tears...more freaking out about the awesomeness of this story actually =]
All of your stories are just amazing! I already red Blood Red Roses, so I'm reading them out of order, but eh. As for the prologue, I think the length was perfect, and I am most definitely NOT bored to tears...more freaking out about the awesomeness of this story actually =]
10/18/2010 c5 
1Ali.Bear
I've been a fan of your short stories for a while and decided to try one of your longer ones. I like the idea, but there are a lot of typos and oddly worded sentences so far. For example, "It's been a rough night and neither Adele, the detectives nor me deserve any of your wrath." It should be "Nor I". "Go to sleep. You look like horrible," "You look like you got hit head on by a tractor trailer." And, "He called the only phone number that the man he wanted would answer." This is an example of an oddly worded sentence. It isn't very smooth, and sounds very awkward. It needs editing, but so far I like the idea.
1Ali.BearI've been a fan of your short stories for a while and decided to try one of your longer ones. I like the idea, but there are a lot of typos and oddly worded sentences so far. For example, "It's been a rough night and neither Adele, the detectives nor me deserve any of your wrath." It should be "Nor I". "Go to sleep. You look like horrible," "You look like you got hit head on by a tractor trailer." And, "He called the only phone number that the man he wanted would answer." This is an example of an oddly worded sentence. It isn't very smooth, and sounds very awkward. It needs editing, but so far I like the idea.
6/27/2010 c12 2CrossMyHeart
"Hell, you were practically begging for it! Look, no you got me made."
Made should be mad
2CrossMyHeart"Hell, you were practically begging for it! Look, no you got me made."
Made should be mad
2/22/2010 c1 GinzzzRoxxx
I just read every single one of your stories (except the unfinished ones) and love them (favourites gotta be the famous guy and the boat).
I just read every single one of your stories (except the unfinished ones) and love them (favourites gotta be the famous guy and the boat).
2/20/2010 c8 lrstar123
I love this story! The plotline travels at a fast rate with believable twists and turns. The characters are all interesting with their personal flaws and abilities. I think you're a great writer and I can't wait to read more of your stories!
I love this story! The plotline travels at a fast rate with believable twists and turns. The characters are all interesting with their personal flaws and abilities. I think you're a great writer and I can't wait to read more of your stories!
8/24/2009 c19 AJ southern
I'm absolutely amazed that you wrote this story at 15 years old. It was a really well written story, be very proud of yourself! Thanks for sharing. :)
I'm absolutely amazed that you wrote this story at 15 years old. It was a really well written story, be very proud of yourself! Thanks for sharing. :)
4/25/2009 c15 ammullyaa
Before he could reply, her mouth was on his and her pants were unbuttoning his shirt. Her hands travelled lightly over his muscles and stopped to trace a small scar on his left shoulder. "What happened here?"
"her pants were unbuttoning his shirt..." i think you meant hands?
and you spelled "traveled" wrong.
but other than that, this story, and all your others, are quite amazing. =]
-amulya
Before he could reply, her mouth was on his and her pants were unbuttoning his shirt. Her hands travelled lightly over his muscles and stopped to trace a small scar on his left shoulder. "What happened here?"
"her pants were unbuttoning his shirt..." i think you meant hands?
and you spelled "traveled" wrong.
but other than that, this story, and all your others, are quite amazing. =]
-amulya