for Directions6/2/2007 c1 
15justine dayea
A very simple yet deep. You didnt need to have alot of words to tell this story. I like it's simplicity...
Keep up the good work
-melai
15justine dayeaA very simple yet deep. You didnt need to have alot of words to tell this story. I like it's simplicity...
Keep up the good work
-melai
6/25/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
wow. i liked the fact that all of this took place in a week. it would seem rushed, which was good for this context. i also liked the ending. how contradictory, it seems. bittersweet, and full of emotion. gorgeous.
-trinity
11les petits bateauxwow. i liked the fact that all of this took place in a week. it would seem rushed, which was good for this context. i also liked the ending. how contradictory, it seems. bittersweet, and full of emotion. gorgeous.
-trinity
6/13/2006 c1 EnigmaticArsenic
beautifully bittersweet. the way you divided the relationship into days- it's like the phases people go through with the real things, isn't it? even when they last more than a week, lol.
beautifully bittersweet. the way you divided the relationship into days- it's like the phases people go through with the real things, isn't it? even when they last more than a week, lol.
1/24/2006 c1 4Masked Glovemaker
Very sentimental te you have here. Kind of strange ow this huge romance last just a week,but then again, "with matters of the heart there is no time to waste." Nice story all in all.
4Masked GlovemakerVery sentimental te you have here. Kind of strange ow this huge romance last just a week,but then again, "with matters of the heart there is no time to waste." Nice story all in all.
12/6/2005 c1 Ashes
It sweet, yet captivating and a bit of aura of mystery, grim yet sentimental. I have no idea what am I saying but this is really good. :)
It sweet, yet captivating and a bit of aura of mystery, grim yet sentimental. I have no idea what am I saying but this is really good. :)
8/14/2005 c1 DruidShadow
This is a very nice peice of material. I like it. Short, sweet and romantic. Nice touch. Good job. Keep up the good writings.
~Shadow
This is a very nice peice of material. I like it. Short, sweet and romantic. Nice touch. Good job. Keep up the good writings.
~Shadow
7/28/2005 c1 B.T. Lines
That was so sad and sweet. I think it would make a great extended story. If you write one, make sure to tell me!
That was so sad and sweet. I think it would make a great extended story. If you write one, make sure to tell me!
5/31/2005 c1 1amber-rae
This is such a nice poetic short story. Very moving, I'm quite glad that I read it.
1amber-raeThis is such a nice poetic short story. Very moving, I'm quite glad that I read it.
1/21/2005 c1 3Crazy Biene
I really like this...its short, but it is interesting. You really know how to use the riht words.
3Crazy BieneI really like this...its short, but it is interesting. You really know how to use the riht words.
1/18/2005 c1 crazychik
My fp name is really crazychik. I was lazy to log on. I read this and I thought "whoa..this guy is good". I really loved this! I am going to give a shot at your other stories, but to let you know...I love this!
My fp name is really crazychik. I was lazy to log on. I read this and I thought "whoa..this guy is good". I really loved this! I am going to give a shot at your other stories, but to let you know...I love this!
1/7/2005 c1 Jameela
aw that was so0o0o sad,gr8 story
aw that was so0o0o sad,gr8 story