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6/16/2003 c1 49recalcitrant
hey that was a good poem. you are a good writer and i see u improving. if u want you should read some of my poems and review them to let me know if their are bad ok good yada yada. i suggest ("time", "be where i want to be", "you f* c* and girl1/girl2) thanx
6/15/2003 c1 18The Seraph-Fruitbat
beautiful evocation of the emotions, in addition the careful shaping of the words into a columnic shape emphasizes the falling into darkness. A nice flow and feel within.

Very nicely written

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