for Sugar Rush10/8/2004 c1 
6WakkoRyan
In my opinion, both versions could continue to be true if the word "bad" was replaced with the word "good." Depends on what type of image you want to maintain.
6WakkoRyanIn my opinion, both versions could continue to be true if the word "bad" was replaced with the word "good." Depends on what type of image you want to maintain.
6/27/2004 c1 Incrys
"No I didn't have sugar last night..." Of course you didn't... ::grins:: I like the second ending a little more.
"No I didn't have sugar last night..." Of course you didn't... ::grins:: I like the second ending a little more.
6/20/2004 c1 20Elbereth141
People really like you when ur hyper if they're hyper too... I liked the first ending.
Elbereth
p.s. how do you get so many reviews?
20Elbereth141People really like you when ur hyper if they're hyper too... I liked the first ending.
Elbereth
p.s. how do you get so many reviews?
6/29/2003 c1 76CoolBeans18s
SWEET! Okay, bad pun. Great poem! I like the second ending best.
~ CoolBeans18s
76CoolBeans18sSWEET! Okay, bad pun. Great poem! I like the second ending best.
~ CoolBeans18s
6/17/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
nice haiku! i like both endings. yeah, sugar is bad for you. makes you sugar-high. i still love it. keep on writing!
36obsidian katananice haiku! i like both endings. yeah, sugar is bad for you. makes you sugar-high. i still love it. keep on writing!