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7/13/2003 c5 Roger Singe
Dude taht was creepy and disturbing! Yet very good oodly enough.
7/6/2003 c5 7Liriel87
wow I really like it. The whole story plot is really interesting. I wonder what will happen...update soon! Peace out!

Liriel
7/6/2003 c1 14matt15086
Really good story! I was wondering if you can review mine called Earth is under attack. Thanks!

Bye
7/6/2003 c4 5Autumn Pierce
It looks awesome, I really like the parts from Rider's view. Please update!
6/19/2003 c2 Autumn Pierce
It looks really good so far! If you continued on to the wedding, I think it'd be funny. It says horror on it, but it doesn't seem much of a horror story? Though I hope it isn't, it's your story.
6/19/2003 c1 2Lark Olivia
it hs potential, but its really scattered and unorganized. Try revising before you post. Go through the plot for each so you can see how its supposed to go.
6/17/2003 c2 5FlyingPhish
Again with the funny bantering. The two of them, geez, very funny.
6/17/2003 c1 FlyingPhish
lol

AAron sounds a bit obnoxious. He's amusing to read about. Quite funny really. The two of them, are like baking soda and vineagar.

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