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8/11/2004 c1 18Rose Vicious
... we've all went though this sort of feeling haven't we? But great poem! I liked the spacy thing with "E d g e s b l u r ," and so on and so forth. It was cool!
8/10/2004 c1 14HereIDreamtIWasAnArchitect
-wince- Harsh. What love song did you remake, here?
o_o Ouch. Very ouch. Very nice, though. Sort of angry, feeling betrayed perhaps?
8/5/2004 c1 1A Chroi
Again, I'm loving the formatting. It's different and quirky and gives the poem a lot of depth. Yay for you!
7/9/2003 c1 13avidelecteur
Oh, sweet. Yes, I know it's sad, but kinda sweet too. I love the way you space out the words to blur them... it works perfectly. I tmight look more blurred without the commas tho and u can claim poetic license.

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