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9/18/2004 c1 10JQ3
Powerful work. The figurative cage you created was neat.
8/11/2004 c1 18Rose Vicious
You placed your words very strangly, but thats what makes your style of poetry so unique, which is why I like it! The mixed feelings of oximorons on hot and cold, only to trap you once again. I like!
8/10/2004 c1 14HereIDreamtIWasAnArchitect
Ah yes, we've all felt like this, haven't we? ^_^
8/31/2003 c1 70elvenstorm
I like the line about digging nails into my consciousness and the cage. You capture emotions well
7/8/2003 c1 just a gurl
i like this one alot really good
6/29/2003 c1 69til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton
First I want to say thanks for reviewing

First Kiss. Next I want to say this is good poem. Keep Writing
6/17/2003 c1 2Et Tu Brute
nicely done, short n sweet, just how i like 'em,

Digging its steel nails in my conscious

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