for People of Faith1/26/2004 c10 
148JJR Meerraf
I love this one! It held more emotion then I think you've ever written, (which says a LOT). This was wonderful, beautiful, I love the story also. Just wondering, are you going to see The Passion? Mel Gibson's movie?
A great poem!
148JJR MeerrafI love this one! It held more emotion then I think you've ever written, (which says a LOT). This was wonderful, beautiful, I love the story also. Just wondering, are you going to see The Passion? Mel Gibson's movie?
A great poem!
1/26/2004 c9 JJR Meerraf
Pretty good, I have to say that some parts seemed a little mild, but overall it was still great! As for your penanme: Don't Change IT! I personlly and honestly think you have like the coolest pen name, or one of the at least. But that's just me, and you'll be a great writer no matter what your name is :). Beautiful work!
Pretty good, I have to say that some parts seemed a little mild, but overall it was still great! As for your penanme: Don't Change IT! I personlly and honestly think you have like the coolest pen name, or one of the at least. But that's just me, and you'll be a great writer no matter what your name is :). Beautiful work!
1/26/2004 c8 JJR Meerraf
I think you should try some more "mushy" poems, you might like them :). Sorry, just a suggestion. But I really liked it. This story especially I like cause I always find it sort of... funny, sweet, but funny. You wrote it and portrayed it excellently also!
I think you should try some more "mushy" poems, you might like them :). Sorry, just a suggestion. But I really liked it. This story especially I like cause I always find it sort of... funny, sweet, but funny. You wrote it and portrayed it excellently also!
1/26/2004 c7 JJR Meerraf
Not one of your best? Why? What's wrong with it? I thought it was magnificent! From a magnificent writer as well!
Not one of your best? Why? What's wrong with it? I thought it was magnificent! From a magnificent writer as well!
1/26/2004 c6 JJR Meerraf
I like how you write the story in quite a simplistic sense but still make it flow so magically. Excellent!
I like how you write the story in quite a simplistic sense but still make it flow so magically. Excellent!
1/26/2004 c5 JJR Meerraf
I really like the last line, cuase it really points out the truth of it all, faith was the thing that saved her. wonderful work!
I really like the last line, cuase it really points out the truth of it all, faith was the thing that saved her. wonderful work!
1/26/2004 c4 JJR Meerraf
Really cool, I didn't know you could sum up the story of Moses in three stanzas, :), but you did a great job at doing it.
Really cool, I didn't know you could sum up the story of Moses in three stanzas, :), but you did a great job at doing it.
1/26/2004 c2 JJR Meerraf
That's a really good story too, your poem presented it wonderfully! I loved it!
P.S.
Wow, a lot of P.S.'s today huh? sorry :). Anyway, I'd love to learn Haiku! Thanks!
That's a really good story too, your poem presented it wonderfully! I loved it!
P.S.
Wow, a lot of P.S.'s today huh? sorry :). Anyway, I'd love to learn Haiku! Thanks!
1/26/2004 c1 JJR Meerraf
I loved the last stanza, but the first two were excellent as well. Wonderful work!
P.S.
I'm sorry about the cut out sentance in my previous review, the computer cut out or something, I don't know.
P.P.S.
I'm not offended or anything with you not reading my R stuff. I totally understand, and to be honest they're rated R for a very good reason.
Wonderful work again!
I loved the last stanza, but the first two were excellent as well. Wonderful work!
P.S.
I'm sorry about the cut out sentance in my previous review, the computer cut out or something, I don't know.
P.P.S.
I'm not offended or anything with you not reading my R stuff. I totally understand, and to be honest they're rated R for a very good reason.
Wonderful work again!
1/19/2004 c3 3Emerald Ember
i like the book of jonah, i think that you said it all, vaguely but said it all so you didnt miss anything...
sorry more questions, is there a set number of stanzas you can have to a haiku? (im more of a story writer then a poem writer, not so good at them :P)
3Emerald Emberi like the book of jonah, i think that you said it all, vaguely but said it all so you didnt miss anything...
sorry more questions, is there a set number of stanzas you can have to a haiku? (im more of a story writer then a poem writer, not so good at them :P)
1/19/2004 c1 Emerald Ember
you go girl!, love the writing, love the fact theat you stand up for what you believe in, keep writing!
ps im a sister :) lol
you go girl!, love the writing, love the fact theat you stand up for what you believe in, keep writing!
ps im a sister :) lol