
12/13/2003 c10 Sycho Skitz
I love reading your haikus about Bible characters...you do such an awesome job! In such limited space too! Definitely continue with more characters.
-Skitz
P.S. My favorite is Job. ^_^
I love reading your haikus about Bible characters...you do such an awesome job! In such limited space too! Definitely continue with more characters.
-Skitz
P.S. My favorite is Job. ^_^
12/13/2003 c8 Sycho Skitz
Amazing...
I agree with PainKiller. You SHOULD try and make these into children's books...(hint hint lol)
-Skitz
Amazing...
I agree with PainKiller. You SHOULD try and make these into children's books...(hint hint lol)
-Skitz
12/13/2003 c7 Sycho Skitz
Another well-written haiku...Joseph is another character I really admire for his strong faith in God.
-Skitz
Another well-written haiku...Joseph is another character I really admire for his strong faith in God.
-Skitz
12/13/2003 c5 Sycho Skitz
Oh, beautiful job once again. You write things so well in such a short space.
-Skitz
Oh, beautiful job once again. You write things so well in such a short space.
-Skitz
12/13/2003 c3 Sycho Skitz
Naw, I don't think you left anything out. Your short and simplified version sounds better anyway. Yay!
-Skitz
Naw, I don't think you left anything out. Your short and simplified version sounds better anyway. Yay!
-Skitz
12/13/2003 c2 Sycho Skitz
Awesome description. I really admire your talent!
Ah, Job. Such an admirable character. His whole life really does make you think and put things in perspective. It's like, wow. After all his misfortunes and losses he never lost sight of God, never lost faith. People should take and learn a lesson from Job.
Anyways, bravo!
-Skitz
Awesome description. I really admire your talent!
Ah, Job. Such an admirable character. His whole life really does make you think and put things in perspective. It's like, wow. After all his misfortunes and losses he never lost sight of God, never lost faith. People should take and learn a lesson from Job.
Anyways, bravo!
-Skitz
11/15/2003 c10
14Getuie
I really love the way you can give so much detail within the restrictions... This was one of your best ones

I really love the way you can give so much detail within the restrictions... This was one of your best ones
10/25/2003 c10
2Star-Gir1
Wow...all of the haikus are wonderful! ^_^ My favorite are Peter and Ruth. :) You portrayed them from the Bible excellently! Keep up the wonderful work, and God bless!

Wow...all of the haikus are wonderful! ^_^ My favorite are Peter and Ruth. :) You portrayed them from the Bible excellently! Keep up the wonderful work, and God bless!
10/21/2003 c1
4Niph speaks
Oh, THESE ARE WONDERFUL, Chikara! *grins and hugs* It's been so long since I've been on FictionPress, and it's great to see you're still thriving. It makes me so happy to see you using your great talent with haiku to spread the Word to other people. God Bless you! *hugs*

Oh, THESE ARE WONDERFUL, Chikara! *grins and hugs* It's been so long since I've been on FictionPress, and it's great to see you're still thriving. It makes me so happy to see you using your great talent with haiku to spread the Word to other people. God Bless you! *hugs*
10/11/2003 c8
2Star-Gir1
Thanks again for the beautiful reviews! :) Your haikus are wonderful, they really tell a lot about the characters of the Bible. Keep up the fabulous work! God bless!

Thanks again for the beautiful reviews! :) Your haikus are wonderful, they really tell a lot about the characters of the Bible. Keep up the fabulous work! God bless!
10/8/2003 c1
62Turquoise Draka
Thanks for reviewing my piece I like the idea of poems about the bible.
I don't ottally hate religion, but my hope is kinda down. I appreciated the view!
Turquoise

Thanks for reviewing my piece I like the idea of poems about the bible.
I don't ottally hate religion, but my hope is kinda down. I appreciated the view!
Turquoise