for People of Faith8/6/2003 c1 huntress artemis
i love you people of faith haikus. Could you do one about Peter? About how he betrayed Jesus but was sorry for it later. Then became the most faithful of all the disciples. And Noah too. And John the Baptist. Please. I really love you work.
i love you people of faith haikus. Could you do one about Peter? About how he betrayed Jesus but was sorry for it later. Then became the most faithful of all the disciples. And Noah too. And John the Baptist. Please. I really love you work.
7/19/2003 c6 
1Umi Freer
It's as if you know all of these people personally. I wish that I was almost as good with words as you are. For your next chapter, I hope you do Ruth or John (not the Baptist but disciple). They are two of my favorite Bible characters.
1Umi FreerIt's as if you know all of these people personally. I wish that I was almost as good with words as you are. For your next chapter, I hope you do Ruth or John (not the Baptist but disciple). They are two of my favorite Bible characters.
7/17/2003 c6 126swift sky silver
yet another great story shortened and still fairly informative. these are great=0)
126swift sky silveryet another great story shortened and still fairly informative. these are great=0)
7/17/2003 c2 swift sky silver
i like how you are able to use the proper haiku rule and have a fair amount of vocab in it as well=0)
i like how you are able to use the proper haiku rule and have a fair amount of vocab in it as well=0)
7/12/2003 c1 51content with rhyme
That was wonderful! I could harldy ever write Haiku's myself, so know that the talent you have is precious. I love the book of Psalms, and the Proverbs are wonderful as well. David was very talented, and most of all a great man of GOD. I do think he, and others, deserve to be written about, so keep it up! :o)
51content with rhymeThat was wonderful! I could harldy ever write Haiku's myself, so know that the talent you have is precious. I love the book of Psalms, and the Proverbs are wonderful as well. David was very talented, and most of all a great man of GOD. I do think he, and others, deserve to be written about, so keep it up! :o)
7/10/2003 c6 100Keep it 100
I've heard this story before. Nice work on capturing it.
~Heart of the Sword
100Keep it 100I've heard this story before. Nice work on capturing it.
~Heart of the Sword
7/10/2003 c6 7fool-of-a-took2
EEp! Thank you for the dedication - this is such an awesome haiku. Esther is one of my favourite characters in the Bible.
I love how you emphasise that she was just a commoner and yet she became queen. So many people feel like they can't do anything to help others because they feel like just a normal person. Another wonderful job!
7fool-of-a-took2EEp! Thank you for the dedication - this is such an awesome haiku. Esther is one of my favourite characters in the Bible.
I love how you emphasise that she was just a commoner and yet she became queen. So many people feel like they can't do anything to help others because they feel like just a normal person. Another wonderful job!
7/10/2003 c1 70elvenstorm
I like it it's good. It's very original to do bible Haikus i've never seen that before
70elvenstormI like it it's good. It's very original to do bible Haikus i've never seen that before
7/10/2003 c6 76CoolBeans18s
Neat! I haven't read that book yet, I'll have to look at it. Hmm Esther-Esther. Even I can remember that!
~ CoolBeans18s
76CoolBeans18sNeat! I haven't read that book yet, I'll have to look at it. Hmm Esther-Esther. Even I can remember that!
~ CoolBeans18s
7/10/2003 c6 PainKiller
Awesome. Good idea, I'm glad you decided to choose this. I love the story of Esther. Keep on writing.
Awesome. Good idea, I'm glad you decided to choose this. I love the story of Esther. Keep on writing.
7/9/2003 c1 charity
hey...
i think it would b cul if u wrote a hycoo (or however u spell that) about one of the disiples!
hey...
i think it would b cul if u wrote a hycoo (or however u spell that) about one of the disiples!