
6/28/2003 c4 PainKiller
I love all of your haikus on the Bible. You really do a marvelous job on them. This is no exception. Keep up the good work.
I love all of your haikus on the Bible. You really do a marvelous job on them. This is no exception. Keep up the good work.
6/28/2003 c4
76CoolBeans18s
Like I said before, you've written it beautifully. Wonderful job!
~ CoolBeans18s

Like I said before, you've written it beautifully. Wonderful job!
~ CoolBeans18s
6/28/2003 c3 CoolBeans18s
You simplified it beautifully! You managed to fit quite a lot in only 9 lines! Brilliantly written, of course!
~ CoolBeans18s
You simplified it beautifully! You managed to fit quite a lot in only 9 lines! Brilliantly written, of course!
~ CoolBeans18s
6/24/2003 c2 PainKiller
Yes, I think everyone who complains about their life, or people who really do have a terrible life should read Job, and they would realize so much. Awesome work.
Yes, I think everyone who complains about their life, or people who really do have a terrible life should read Job, and they would realize so much. Awesome work.
6/24/2003 c1 PainKiller
What a haiku! I was really impressed with this. You've captured the essence of David and what he stood for. Keep it up.
What a haiku! I was really impressed with this. You've captured the essence of David and what he stood for. Keep it up.
6/23/2003 c1
25just-smile
Although I`m not Christian I admire your faith and your writing. The words were put together beautifully

Although I`m not Christian I admire your faith and your writing. The words were put together beautifully
6/22/2003 c2
76CoolBeans18s
I really admire Job. So many terrible things happened to him, yet he still stood strong in his faith. Another brilliant poem!
~ CoolBeans18s

I really admire Job. So many terrible things happened to him, yet he still stood strong in his faith. Another brilliant poem!
~ CoolBeans18s
6/22/2003 c1 CoolBeans18s
'Fearless man of faith'! Wow! Totally amazing! Wonderful job!
~ CoolBeans18s
'Fearless man of faith'! Wow! Totally amazing! Wonderful job!
~ CoolBeans18s
6/21/2003 c2
57teh tarik
Unending, strong faith in the Lord...he firmly clung on to his beliefs even when god put him to test...

Unending, strong faith in the Lord...he firmly clung on to his beliefs even when god put him to test...
6/21/2003 c1 teh tarik
o! David! the one who killed Goliath wasn't it? I liked the way you described him!
o! David! the one who killed Goliath wasn't it? I liked the way you described him!