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6/28/2003 c4 PainKiller
I love all of your haikus on the Bible. You really do a marvelous job on them. This is no exception. Keep up the good work.
6/28/2003 c3 PainKiller
Yeah, great job on compacting the story! Very nice. I really enjoyed it.
6/28/2003 c4 76CoolBeans18s
Like I said before, you've written it beautifully. Wonderful job!

~ CoolBeans18s
6/28/2003 c3 CoolBeans18s
You simplified it beautifully! You managed to fit quite a lot in only 9 lines! Brilliantly written, of course!

~ CoolBeans18s
6/24/2003 c2 PainKiller
Yes, I think everyone who complains about their life, or people who really do have a terrible life should read Job, and they would realize so much. Awesome work.
6/24/2003 c1 PainKiller
What a haiku! I was really impressed with this. You've captured the essence of David and what he stood for. Keep it up.
6/23/2003 c1 25just-smile
Although I`m not Christian I admire your faith and your writing. The words were put together beautifully
6/22/2003 c2 76CoolBeans18s
I really admire Job. So many terrible things happened to him, yet he still stood strong in his faith. Another brilliant poem!

~ CoolBeans18s
6/22/2003 c1 CoolBeans18s
'Fearless man of faith'! Wow! Totally amazing! Wonderful job!

~ CoolBeans18s
6/21/2003 c2 100Keep it 100
This is a great collection. Keep it up.

~Heart of the Sword
6/21/2003 c2 57teh tarik
Unending, strong faith in the Lord...he firmly clung on to his beliefs even when god put him to test...
6/21/2003 c1 teh tarik
o! David! the one who killed Goliath wasn't it? I liked the way you described him!
6/20/2003 c1 17Jade6
Sounds like quite the individual. A beautiful tribute to an impressive figure.

Thanks so much for all your kind words about my poetry.

Jade
6/17/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
You did a good job describing him. Very nice work.

~Heart of the Sword
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