for Black Sunshine4/24/2004 c1 
64not sure yet
interesting, i like it though, has a very good flow to it and has an odd sad yet not feel to it, muchly nice, excellent job
64not sure yetinteresting, i like it though, has a very good flow to it and has an odd sad yet not feel to it, muchly nice, excellent job
6/29/2003 c1 89Stoffpferd
Wow...was kann man anderes dazu sagen als Wow, wow und nochmals wow? (ich glaub ich hör mich wie n hund an...mmh) Wirklich irre gut geschrieben, Respekt!
~Stoffpferd~
89StoffpferdWow...was kann man anderes dazu sagen als Wow, wow und nochmals wow? (ich glaub ich hör mich wie n hund an...mmh) Wirklich irre gut geschrieben, Respekt!
~Stoffpferd~
6/17/2003 c1 98hurtmushroom
Hey, das ist toll. Richtig cool! Meine Lieblingszeilen sind:
"Until the sun came and destroyed her mind
Until the sun succeeded and took her soul"
Einfach genial!
cio, hoellenwauwau
98hurtmushroomHey, das ist toll. Richtig cool! Meine Lieblingszeilen sind:
"Until the sun came and destroyed her mind
Until the sun succeeded and took her soul"
Einfach genial!
cio, hoellenwauwau
6/17/2003 c1 22Asmodeus Sanity
pretty good, but a lil repetative... u could fix the rhythms by maybe using 'til as opposed to until (example: Until the sun succeeded and took her soul)
22Asmodeus Sanitypretty good, but a lil repetative... u could fix the rhythms by maybe using 'til as opposed to until (example: Until the sun succeeded and took her soul)