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6/17/2003 c1 59kep
i like the repitition at the end and the way the language slightly switches from more refined into casual. good.
6/17/2003 c1 Marguerite de Chantillion
I liked your poem very much; it flowed well. Unlike many non-rhyming pieces, particularly ones classified as "angst", it escaped the woe-is-me, platitude-ridden, trap and became a really wonderful poem. My favorite line: "Balanced dished now topple/

Crashing to the cutting room floor" While there are a few typos, this is an overall great poem.

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