for The fires within12/2/2003 c1 
13Elizabeth Gordon
This is beautifully written, i'm sure all of us have heard the little positive and negative voices together, well i have though i may be crazy, who knows. But i really love this, in a way it's what i tried to represent in my own poem. Well anyways, take care x and the negative side will be the first ones to see the bad coming therefor the first ones to jump for cover, so we're better off.
13Elizabeth GordonThis is beautifully written, i'm sure all of us have heard the little positive and negative voices together, well i have though i may be crazy, who knows. But i really love this, in a way it's what i tried to represent in my own poem. Well anyways, take care x and the negative side will be the first ones to see the bad coming therefor the first ones to jump for cover, so we're better off.
11/22/2003 c1 Spatula-Master
I remember when you sent this to me, but it still amazes me how well the description truly gets a good picture in your head. I kinda get what the other guy was saying, when i read it together it also made sense (in most parts) did you intend it that way or was that just a big coincidence. anyway. I LOVE it, in fact i added it to my favs. BYE! (i just realized my teeth are smooth! :D i'm really hyper)
I remember when you sent this to me, but it still amazes me how well the description truly gets a good picture in your head. I kinda get what the other guy was saying, when i read it together it also made sense (in most parts) did you intend it that way or was that just a big coincidence. anyway. I LOVE it, in fact i added it to my favs. BYE! (i just realized my teeth are smooth! :D i'm really hyper)
10/11/2003 c1 27Spirit Child
This is great, I read the regular lines and then the - lines like you said and then i tried reading the whole thing ignoring them. It actually read really well when I did that sort of scitzophrenic yes i am/ no your not thing you know opposite perspectives from the same person thing but it was still really cool.
27Spirit ChildThis is great, I read the regular lines and then the - lines like you said and then i tried reading the whole thing ignoring them. It actually read really well when I did that sort of scitzophrenic yes i am/ no your not thing you know opposite perspectives from the same person thing but it was still really cool.
9/29/2003 c1 2Fae Azuriel
Muhahahaha! 'Tis me, the evil munchkin!
-erm...sharon? It's me, e-ola. I got a hold of you! I was searching for naiad but the idea of nereid came to me in my flute practise, like *cough* many...other things *cough* poem *cough*
Manny god reviews for this one, I see? It's really long, and a bit confusing,
-but I really like this one. Somehow I must of missed it in your other writing that I read today. Really, I can think of no advice to give you...
2Fae AzurielMuhahahaha! 'Tis me, the evil munchkin!
-erm...sharon? It's me, e-ola. I got a hold of you! I was searching for naiad but the idea of nereid came to me in my flute practise, like *cough* many...other things *cough* poem *cough*
Manny god reviews for this one, I see? It's really long, and a bit confusing,
-but I really like this one. Somehow I must of missed it in your other writing that I read today. Really, I can think of no advice to give you...
6/23/2003 c1 128Zainab
I think it flows when you read it together. It makes sense. It gives a sense of a person fighting with themselves, kind of like an inner struggle. Kind of like the angel and devil on shoulder thing, and no I wasn't thinking about angels and devils while reading this...
128ZainabI think it flows when you read it together. It makes sense. It gives a sense of a person fighting with themselves, kind of like an inner struggle. Kind of like the angel and devil on shoulder thing, and no I wasn't thinking about angels and devils while reading this...
6/20/2003 c1 16Sakamura
Great poem. Good flow. please keep writing and keep up the great work...not to sound cliche.
16SakamuraGreat poem. Good flow. please keep writing and keep up the great work...not to sound cliche.
6/17/2003 c1 1l'orage d'absinthe
Wow.
I really like this. the best poem i've read in a long time.
i like your style and your way of expressing yourself.
keep writing.
1l'orage d'absintheWow.
I really like this. the best poem i've read in a long time.
i like your style and your way of expressing yourself.
keep writing.