for Goddess of the Nile9/29/2010 c12 Nijigasumi
I love this story! It's very thought provoking! It's such a shame that you're not updating it anymore. :(
I love this story! It's very thought provoking! It's such a shame that you're not updating it anymore. :(
2/27/2007 c12 
1Enaid
i really like this story but i see that it has not been updated for a while... any reason. i would love it if you decided to start up on it again. update soon!
1Enaidi really like this story but i see that it has not been updated for a while... any reason. i would love it if you decided to start up on it again. update soon!
11/30/2004 c12 5shit2makebliss
This story is amazing. The plot is so well formed and the characters are wonderfully developed! I can't really think of anything else you need to do, except write more chapters! I will be eagerly awaiting your updates. By the way, this is my first ever review. I am sorry if I did it wrong.
5shit2makeblissThis story is amazing. The plot is so well formed and the characters are wonderfully developed! I can't really think of anything else you need to do, except write more chapters! I will be eagerly awaiting your updates. By the way, this is my first ever review. I am sorry if I did it wrong.
11/26/2004 c1 5K-razy Grrl
Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, UPDATE!
5K-razy GrrlPlease, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, UPDATE!
11/11/2004 c12 Rachel
woah..this story rocks my soks..*cough*i really should stop listening 2 my friends sayings.lol oo i wonder who set is i want 2 find out so hurry and update!The past is now another land
Far beyond my reach
Invaded by insidious
Foreign bodies, foreign speech
Where timeless joys of childhood
Lie broken on the beach The present is an empty space
Between the good and bad
A moment leading nowhere
Too pointless to be sad
But time enough to lay to waste
Every certainty I had The future is a barren world
From which I can't return
Both heartless and material
Its wretched spoils not my concern
Shining like an evil sun
As my childhood treasures burn
Shining like an evil sun
As my childhood treasures burn sry i was looking up lyrics for one of my songs from Aida and i thought i pretty sounding..heheh well UPDATE
woah..this story rocks my soks..*cough*i really should stop listening 2 my friends sayings.lol oo i wonder who set is i want 2 find out so hurry and update!The past is now another land
Far beyond my reach
Invaded by insidious
Foreign bodies, foreign speech
Where timeless joys of childhood
Lie broken on the beach The present is an empty space
Between the good and bad
A moment leading nowhere
Too pointless to be sad
But time enough to lay to waste
Every certainty I had The future is a barren world
From which I can't return
Both heartless and material
Its wretched spoils not my concern
Shining like an evil sun
As my childhood treasures burn
Shining like an evil sun
As my childhood treasures burn sry i was looking up lyrics for one of my songs from Aida and i thought i pretty sounding..heheh well UPDATE
9/4/2004 c11 Devonshirelass
I'm really enjoying this story, but unfortunatly there seems to be an error on this server, because I cannot get to chapter 12, and am so gutted...
If it helps, all that I have read so far, I thought was pure genius, and had me glued to the computer desk. Keep it up!
I'm really enjoying this story, but unfortunatly there seems to be an error on this server, because I cannot get to chapter 12, and am so gutted...
If it helps, all that I have read so far, I thought was pure genius, and had me glued to the computer desk. Keep it up!
9/3/2004 c12 Larien Telrunya
Great story! Please write more! I havent gotten to read the last half yet, but I will post a more detailed review soon. Good luck! :)
Great story! Please write more! I havent gotten to read the last half yet, but I will post a more detailed review soon. Good luck! :)
8/29/2004 c12 Cryptic-Skye
Ya!
Finally, an update.
btw: is that last but about the doors in a temple, the palace or a undisclosed location (ie. who cares, it's just a door?)
Ah! Just read over it again - Ok, it's in the bedroom. Got that now.
O!
Alanna seems to have some sort of power!
But 'launching him far into the wall' - does that mean that his body was imprinted in the wall? A bit odd if I may say...
Argh! Egypt needs a backbone. Just declare war on the Hitties and be done with it. Either that, or Alanna should show them what happens when you REALLY annoy her.
Ya!
Finally, an update.
btw: is that last but about the doors in a temple, the palace or a undisclosed location (ie. who cares, it's just a door?)
Ah! Just read over it again - Ok, it's in the bedroom. Got that now.
O!
Alanna seems to have some sort of power!
But 'launching him far into the wall' - does that mean that his body was imprinted in the wall? A bit odd if I may say...
Argh! Egypt needs a backbone. Just declare war on the Hitties and be done with it. Either that, or Alanna should show them what happens when you REALLY annoy her.
8/29/2004 c12 3LadySapphireNight
Yay!You updated!I don't know if I reviewed with this name or not, but I LOVE this story, and i can't wait for the next chapter!Please update soon! :)
3LadySapphireNightYay!You updated!I don't know if I reviewed with this name or not, but I LOVE this story, and i can't wait for the next chapter!Please update soon! :)
8/24/2004 c11 SKT
Wow, I just got back from Japan and decided to read some of the things that I had been reading before I left and I am very happy that you have updates. I love this story! I can't wait to find out what will happen! Keep up the good work! ^_^
Wow, I just got back from Japan and decided to read some of the things that I had been reading before I left and I am very happy that you have updates. I love this story! I can't wait to find out what will happen! Keep up the good work! ^_^
7/3/2004 c11 5K-razy Grrl
When Valerie first woke up, and walked into the room, how did she know what Khep was saying since he was speaking in Arabic? (And it was AWESOME! Hurry & update! Please!)
5K-razy GrrlWhen Valerie first woke up, and walked into the room, how did she know what Khep was saying since he was speaking in Arabic? (And it was AWESOME! Hurry & update! Please!)