for Jared and Iris4/4/2006 c4 
14CK Shorty
So far I really like this story. It's funny for one, but it sounds realistic and few can pull it off. You did good (: I love this story. And the chapters.
CK
14CK ShortySo far I really like this story. It's funny for one, but it sounds realistic and few can pull it off. You did good (: I love this story. And the chapters.
CK
3/24/2006 c20 cpd3
Very cute story. Good characters with unexpected twists. I liked the ending; short but sweet.
Very cute story. Good characters with unexpected twists. I liked the ending; short but sweet.
9/29/2005 c19 7MorwenSteelsheen
I am really impressed with this story. I amazed how real and authentic it sounds. I am really looking forward to your next piece of writing.
7MorwenSteelsheenI am really impressed with this story. I amazed how real and authentic it sounds. I am really looking forward to your next piece of writing.
8/22/2005 c20 6Renzie
Wow! Awesome! This story really reminds me of "Good Grief" by Lolly Winston. It's a SUPERB story, much like your own in that sense. I strongly suggest you go purchase that book! I couldn't stop reading. It was amazing ^^
This is too, by the way. Love the storyline! I liked how to chapters were short. They were like mini adventures! I'm off to read the sequel!
3 Congrats for all of your accomplishments,
Renzie
6RenzieWow! Awesome! This story really reminds me of "Good Grief" by Lolly Winston. It's a SUPERB story, much like your own in that sense. I strongly suggest you go purchase that book! I couldn't stop reading. It was amazing ^^
This is too, by the way. Love the storyline! I liked how to chapters were short. They were like mini adventures! I'm off to read the sequel!
3 Congrats for all of your accomplishments,
Renzie
8/22/2005 c1 Renzie
;-; AW! I hate workaholics. My parents are both work-robots. In fact, it's one in the morning and I'm home alone. Anyway, enough about me. I MUST READ THE NEXT CHAPTERS! But like I said...it's one in the morning ^^' I WILL get back to this one :3
;-; AW! I hate workaholics. My parents are both work-robots. In fact, it's one in the morning and I'm home alone. Anyway, enough about me. I MUST READ THE NEXT CHAPTERS! But like I said...it's one in the morning ^^' I WILL get back to this one :3
7/8/2005 c4 2MarielleRay
hey, i like the story so far.but you havent really given the characters any description.
2MarielleRayhey, i like the story so far.but you havent really given the characters any description.
8/20/2004 c20 Disgruntled Pen
That was so good. I couldn't move myself to do anything until I finished this. I liked it a lot. And now, since I've completed it, I'm off to bed. Well done!
That was so good. I couldn't move myself to do anything until I finished this. I liked it a lot. And now, since I've completed it, I'm off to bed. Well done!
8/10/2004 c20 13Twizzlers
Wow, that was excellent. I just read the whole thing straight through while I'm supossed to be reading mythology for school, and I'm a little sad that I didn't catch it earlier because now it's finished. But that's okay because it really was good and very well written and as long as you're writing a sequel, it's okay. So, very good job and I think I'm going to go read the sequel now. Twizz
13TwizzlersWow, that was excellent. I just read the whole thing straight through while I'm supossed to be reading mythology for school, and I'm a little sad that I didn't catch it earlier because now it's finished. But that's okay because it really was good and very well written and as long as you're writing a sequel, it's okay. So, very good job and I think I'm going to go read the sequel now. Twizz
6/2/2004 c19 hjgtfdchjmjh
Oh god this seems so real and much more intense than the usual love stories on FictionPress. Real is the key word here, I think. The way these two are in love makes me think of the way I'm in love. I can actually remember feeling and doing some of these things. Freaky...
Oh god this seems so real and much more intense than the usual love stories on FictionPress. Real is the key word here, I think. The way these two are in love makes me think of the way I'm in love. I can actually remember feeling and doing some of these things. Freaky...
5/16/2004 c20 156ShadowPharoh
what a cute ending!
~SHADOW~
P.S. thanks for the review. i enjoyed reading your story alot!
156ShadowPharohwhat a cute ending!
~SHADOW~
P.S. thanks for the review. i enjoyed reading your story alot!