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9/14/2013 c1 Elaine
I loved your story. It surprised me because the characters were very realistic and it shows how you dont have to look like a model to be beautiful through a man's eyes. Great job!
5/2/2012 c1 8theKnobblyKneedWriter
Goodness, this is brilliant :)
8/22/2009 c1 Emily
Did you name her after me? Haha. Just kidding. Anyways, I like the "tenderness" of the story. BUT, it's really uneventful. If I were harsh, I'd say that it's dry and boring. Maybe because you don't even have a plot! Don't be discouraged though. Your style of writing, the way you construct your sentences, they're not too bad. Quite good. But there's always room for improvement. So, all the best.
3/16/2007 c1 Ca17W
I like this story!
8/22/2006 c1 5anacharlie
It is beautiful. =)
10/4/2005 c1 12Learah Kaelar
Beautifully written, I had tears in my eyes...you're right, it's not about sex at all, it's about much, much more. Your imagery is beautiful, but I'm wondering about the hyphens around the word "this" in the first paragraph. I love your writing, it is honest and heartfelt. Keep it up!

Blessed be!
9/25/2005 c1 emerald
*smiles* yes it is beautiful...and marraige just makes a person complete...and gives you the confidence and trust everyone wishes for...loved it!
1/11/2004 c1 23chocolatecreme06
Good story. I like how you described his love for her. It was really sweet!
~Chocolatecreme06
1/10/2004 c1 Jessimica
wow that story was truly beautiful
1/6/2004 c1 pixieloveincorporated
This was my first time on this site, after searching for a while for a place to publish my little stories. Yours was the first story I read and it created a warm, pleasant feeling when I read your note at the bottom of the page. You manage to sculpt your characters for us so that it is almost as if we are there. If the other stories on this site are as pleasant as yours I think I will enjoy this site very much. Thank you for publishing such a beautiful story.
A fellow writer
12/9/2003 c1 zagato
I love this story a lot. Please write more.
12/9/2003 c1 Cooties
That was great! They seemed so in love! I really enjoyed it!
12/8/2003 c1 5Audax Nexcis
A beautiful story, it really does express a lot about why people stay together, and the love that holds them there.
11/26/2003 c1 10Caiterz1337
Aw.. This is alot like my story. I love it. So lovey! ^_^

-Cait
11/26/2003 c1 Demon-Blue 015
Wow! That was deeply touching... i like romances like this... write more please.

~Demon-Blueo15/ kittyshina15 (fp id)
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