for Sakura7/16/2006 c1 
12Tia LaPorte
I love this. It was full of visual imagery. That last line cracks me up ("No, the sakura didn't drown..."). Beautifully done.
12Tia LaPorteI love this. It was full of visual imagery. That last line cracks me up ("No, the sakura didn't drown..."). Beautifully done.
1/22/2006 c1 34likes to headbang
nice imagery.. and that's so awesome.. cuz in the am. vers. of card captors she's called sakura, but in the krn. vers. they call her cherry, and now i know why! thank u ^^ and wonderful poem.
34likes to headbangnice imagery.. and that's so awesome.. cuz in the am. vers. of card captors she's called sakura, but in the krn. vers. they call her cherry, and now i know why! thank u ^^ and wonderful poem.
4/30/2005 c1 31Living in a story called life
cool i have a haiku on cherry blossoms but this one probably is better than mine anyways great job!
31Living in a story called lifecool i have a haiku on cherry blossoms but this one probably is better than mine anyways great job!
3/17/2005 c1 softmusicnroses
I like it!I am in choir and we are singing "Sakura"
**adds to favorites**
I like it!I am in choir and we are singing "Sakura"
**adds to favorites**
3/16/2005 c1 243Manuel Fajar
Black cherry branch floats,
Rushing in Spring water's flood,
Destiny at sea,—
But each pink bud ferried out,
Was a seed that ne'er fulfilled.
243Manuel FajarBlack cherry branch floats,
Rushing in Spring water's flood,
Destiny at sea,—
But each pink bud ferried out,
Was a seed that ne'er fulfilled.
2/9/2005 c1 falconstrife86
Hmm... I definitely like this, but the format is a little off. It may have been better to write it in three haikus that tell one story. Other than that I liked it.
Hmm... I definitely like this, but the format is a little off. It may have been better to write it in three haikus that tell one story. Other than that I liked it.
7/30/2004 c1 Queen Flare
It's a very nice combination of two different styles. Awesome.
Kasaku.
~*~Flare~*~
It's a very nice combination of two different styles. Awesome.
Kasaku.
~*~Flare~*~
7/17/2004 c1 81Ultimate Schuyler
This was... nice, I guess, but I didn't truly understand it. Perhaps you could explain it to me? Please R+R one of my haikus or senryuus.
81Ultimate SchuylerThis was... nice, I guess, but I didn't truly understand it. Perhaps you could explain it to me? Please R+R one of my haikus or senryuus.
5/4/2004 c1 39Sakura163
I'm parcial to Sakura myself...
Woner why?
*looks at screen name*
It's very beautiful!
Love how you utilized the tanka & haiku!
~Sakura~
PS could you read my poem Sakura? It's not a haiku but I think you'll enjoy it. PLZ PLZ PLZ ! ~_^
39Sakura163I'm parcial to Sakura myself...
Woner why?
*looks at screen name*
It's very beautiful!
Love how you utilized the tanka & haiku!
~Sakura~
PS could you read my poem Sakura? It's not a haiku but I think you'll enjoy it. PLZ PLZ PLZ ! ~_^
2/12/2004 c1 3swinger of birches
This is so lovely, Zainab. I don't really have anything specific to say about it, just that it's lovely and conjures a really pretty image in my mind.
3swinger of birchesThis is so lovely, Zainab. I don't really have anything specific to say about it, just that it's lovely and conjures a really pretty image in my mind.