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7/4/2015 c5 3snookstar360
More! I am loving the Patrick-Chrysta relationship! Keep writing!
11/11/2012 c5 randomperson379
Great story. Please continue!
1/29/2012 c5 Alice Rosezella
I really really really like this story! Update soon! :)
10/2/2009 c5 13purpleyes
cool story, hope u update soon :P
3/9/2009 c5 ok
the basic characters personalities are good... but the storyline and possible outcomes are all cliches... i mean come on... evil dictator out to rule the world with a group of magical people? it's getting a bit tiresome for me...

the way you write is pretty good, but i still can't visualize the story in my head... i give this a five on ten
11/21/2008 c5 7cajun-cuteness
YAY! Update please!
11/21/2008 c4 cajun-cuteness
Chrysta rules! She seems really awesome!
11/21/2008 c1 cajun-cuteness
Aw. This is so sad. I can't wait to read the actual story!
3/30/2005 c1 10Chaco
hey~ this is Mika-hime. ^ ^/ go Elements! hee~!
12/19/2004 c3 3Emakoke
Well normally I would say the whole Dark Lord wanting to be immortal and take over the world thing is a bit cliche...but hey, I really liked this! Especially the prologue. It kept me reading, and since I get bored so easily that must mean you're doing a really good job ^^ I think you could help left it a little longer until they found out they were the Elements (it happened rather quickly)...but then again, in my stories I prattle on for ages before the action actually starts. So...yeah. I should shut up. Anyway, I hope to see some more updates!

- Ema
9/6/2004 c1 2RaHo
yay! =D
9/14/2003 c3 37Fantwriter
Fine fine i'll review it even though i sent you an e-mail but i guess this way does give you more...popularity? Oh well, anyways yes it's pretty good, keep on going, right now it's kinda stuck in the boring part like in Harry Potter (
9/14/2003 c1 Le Creature
Interesting action, but I'm not getting a very strong sense on visuals or setting/character. I see a lot of names doing a lot of things, but I don't see the people behind the names.
9/9/2003 c3 36Rhia
Wow...that's so awesome. I love it. I love it. I love it! Is Tobias from animorphs? and the animals, (Tobias and that gray cat) their daemons sorta? ^_^ this is getting real good and real interesting. I can't wait for Ch. 3! hm...I wonder why Chrysta didn't get her stone...

-Rhia
9/9/2003 c2 1Hazel Bite
oh wow, I had no idea you had this up on fp.net!
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