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10/9/2003 c1 4beautifully flawed
I really like this.. I think that you did a great job with discription and repitition.
7/5/2003 c1 anna angel
mwah huns! mwah! i got My heroin dancer poem up. it's under "anna angel" and it's the first poem. i have also scanned the picture in and i'll see if i can put it up on a website somwhere. mwah! see ya on monday.

the most high and exalted,

Ana Angel
6/23/2003 c1 Lux
Oh my, that's so beautiful. Just enough repetition to make it like a dance... so lovely.
6/20/2003 c1 1aleppine
Dude, I love it! Yes, it did cheer me up :D I am only sorry that I never kept my half of the bargain and wrote one related too ... or what was the bargain? I can't actually remember ... was stressing over microbiology, methinks (help!)

I love the 'she was there, I saw her, I sweat she was...' theme, and the repetition of it is really effective. (I am convinced. It's okay, I believe you ...) Images such as 'liquid poison' and red satin make this poem evry sensual (is it just me who finds poison sexy?) and I like the description of her grace. The idea of a dancer dancing on a needle ... well, only you... :D

Love you lots, dude. I'm nearly finished. Tuesday I am a free women ... then we shall set out to conquer the world :D
6/18/2003 c1 45Tifa Highwind
Wow, that's unique. I've never read any poems like that. Keep writing, your poetry is awesome
6/18/2003 c1 21Indigo Williams
That is probably on of the most interesting and unique poems I have ever read. I like how in the poem you seem to be trying to reassure yourself or make somebody believe you. I think that really adds somehing to the poem. Keep up the writing.

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