for The Heroin Dancer10/9/2003 c1 
4beautifully flawed
I really like this.. I think that you did a great job with discription and repitition.
4beautifully flawedI really like this.. I think that you did a great job with discription and repitition.
7/5/2003 c1 anna angel
mwah huns! mwah! i got My heroin dancer poem up. it's under "anna angel" and it's the first poem. i have also scanned the picture in and i'll see if i can put it up on a website somwhere. mwah! see ya on monday.
the most high and exalted,
Ana Angel
mwah huns! mwah! i got My heroin dancer poem up. it's under "anna angel" and it's the first poem. i have also scanned the picture in and i'll see if i can put it up on a website somwhere. mwah! see ya on monday.
the most high and exalted,
Ana Angel
6/23/2003 c1 Lux
Oh my, that's so beautiful. Just enough repetition to make it like a dance... so lovely.
Oh my, that's so beautiful. Just enough repetition to make it like a dance... so lovely.
6/20/2003 c1 1aleppine
Dude, I love it! Yes, it did cheer me up :D I am only sorry that I never kept my half of the bargain and wrote one related too ... or what was the bargain? I can't actually remember ... was stressing over microbiology, methinks (help!)
I love the 'she was there, I saw her, I sweat she was...' theme, and the repetition of it is really effective. (I am convinced. It's okay, I believe you ...) Images such as 'liquid poison' and red satin make this poem evry sensual (is it just me who finds poison sexy?) and I like the description of her grace. The idea of a dancer dancing on a needle ... well, only you... :D
Love you lots, dude. I'm nearly finished. Tuesday I am a free women ... then we shall set out to conquer the world :D
1aleppineDude, I love it! Yes, it did cheer me up :D I am only sorry that I never kept my half of the bargain and wrote one related too ... or what was the bargain? I can't actually remember ... was stressing over microbiology, methinks (help!)
I love the 'she was there, I saw her, I sweat she was...' theme, and the repetition of it is really effective. (I am convinced. It's okay, I believe you ...) Images such as 'liquid poison' and red satin make this poem evry sensual (is it just me who finds poison sexy?) and I like the description of her grace. The idea of a dancer dancing on a needle ... well, only you... :D
Love you lots, dude. I'm nearly finished. Tuesday I am a free women ... then we shall set out to conquer the world :D
6/18/2003 c1 45Tifa Highwind
Wow, that's unique. I've never read any poems like that. Keep writing, your poetry is awesome
45Tifa HighwindWow, that's unique. I've never read any poems like that. Keep writing, your poetry is awesome
6/18/2003 c1 21Indigo Williams
That is probably on of the most interesting and unique poems I have ever read. I like how in the poem you seem to be trying to reassure yourself or make somebody believe you. I think that really adds somehing to the poem. Keep up the writing.
21Indigo WilliamsThat is probably on of the most interesting and unique poems I have ever read. I like how in the poem you seem to be trying to reassure yourself or make somebody believe you. I think that really adds somehing to the poem. Keep up the writing.