for Just a Scratch2/7/2004 c25 Guess
Hey E.T.! Great story! I loved it! I hope you write some more in the future. I have to say I'm glad I read it after it was finished because I would have being going crazy waiting for you to write more. lol I'm glad you finally found out how to use italics, and thoes lyrics were indeed perfect. Can't wait to read your next story, whenever you wirte it. Hope its soon though! Talk to you later.
Hey E.T.! Great story! I loved it! I hope you write some more in the future. I have to say I'm glad I read it after it was finished because I would have being going crazy waiting for you to write more. lol I'm glad you finally found out how to use italics, and thoes lyrics were indeed perfect. Can't wait to read your next story, whenever you wirte it. Hope its soon though! Talk to you later.
1/28/2004 c25 
5River of Fire
Hey CI! Man it's been a long time since I came to Fictionpress.com. I really liked your story. Pretty good ending. Hopefully now I can actually write my story. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
5River of FireHey CI! Man it's been a long time since I came to Fictionpress.com. I really liked your story. Pretty good ending. Hopefully now I can actually write my story. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
1/11/2004 c25 Fenriswolf
Once again, your story is great. I apologize for the comment i posted earlier, and i'm glad that the story was fully concluded. The the selection of music was masterful, as I rarely keep up with today's songs and wouldn't have the patience to search for the song that perfectly matches the situation. Thank you for writing this story and I hope everyone else who read it liked it.
Once again, your story is great. I apologize for the comment i posted earlier, and i'm glad that the story was fully concluded. The the selection of music was masterful, as I rarely keep up with today's songs and wouldn't have the patience to search for the song that perfectly matches the situation. Thank you for writing this story and I hope everyone else who read it liked it.
1/6/2004 c1 Kayleigh
A Happy Ending!
I was hoping it would end that way. The stor was awesome, you should write another one soon!
A Happy Ending!
I was hoping it would end that way. The stor was awesome, you should write another one soon!
12/24/2003 c25 Alethia MS
Nice ending! It's very, very good, and I like Lauren's attitude. I hope it all goes well for them =^^=
Congratulations, it's a fine story. I hope to read more from you soon =^^=
Nice ending! It's very, very good, and I like Lauren's attitude. I hope it all goes well for them =^^=
Congratulations, it's a fine story. I hope to read more from you soon =^^=
12/23/2003 c24 Alethia MS
Well, well, well... Nice story! I'm not really into werewolves, but this story is very good. And don't worry about the chapters being short, since it keeps things simple and easy to understand. You have really good writing skills, and I can't wait to read the epilogue. The way you mix lyrics with the story is really good, even when the italics go kaput *giggles*
You did a nice job with the story. But, well, I did notice some characters just came and went, like you pointed out in your last review from my story (by the by, thanks for your comments =^^=). You should try to fix that in coming stories, so you don't leave too many gaps. Leaving that aside, you are a very good writer. Keep that up!
- Anze
Well, well, well... Nice story! I'm not really into werewolves, but this story is very good. And don't worry about the chapters being short, since it keeps things simple and easy to understand. You have really good writing skills, and I can't wait to read the epilogue. The way you mix lyrics with the story is really good, even when the italics go kaput *giggles*
You did a nice job with the story. But, well, I did notice some characters just came and went, like you pointed out in your last review from my story (by the by, thanks for your comments =^^=). You should try to fix that in coming stories, so you don't leave too many gaps. Leaving that aside, you are a very good writer. Keep that up!
- Anze
12/6/2003 c19 MegaME
Love ur story dude.Adam has so many different problems that I cant even count them. Im beginning to wonder if Nate has anything to do with this at all. I cant wait to see the rest of the story. Right now it is rolling along preatty nicely. Wish I could write something like this. Oh well. Maybe Ill try sometime. Peace.
Love ur story dude.Adam has so many different problems that I cant even count them. Im beginning to wonder if Nate has anything to do with this at all. I cant wait to see the rest of the story. Right now it is rolling along preatty nicely. Wish I could write something like this. Oh well. Maybe Ill try sometime. Peace.
12/2/2003 c18 Fenriswolf
Aww, so sad! That was a cool story and all, but the ending chapter really left me hanging. That same mistake was made at the end of "American Werewolf in London," where, in the last thirty seconds of the movie, the wolf starts to come to his senses, but then he gets shot the the movie is over, with ironically happy music in the credits. The least you could do is give an epilogue.
Aww, so sad! That was a cool story and all, but the ending chapter really left me hanging. That same mistake was made at the end of "American Werewolf in London," where, in the last thirty seconds of the movie, the wolf starts to come to his senses, but then he gets shot the the movie is over, with ironically happy music in the credits. The least you could do is give an epilogue.
11/28/2003 c17 Fenriswolf
Cool sory, but I didn't quite understand it. I something going to happen to Jeff? I hope you will clear all the gaps in the next chapter.
Cool sory, but I didn't quite understand it. I something going to happen to Jeff? I hope you will clear all the gaps in the next chapter.
11/19/2003 c16 Kayleigh
hey-erm-Adam...
teehee :D
Great chapter!
add more soon!
i'm sneaking on the comp. rite now, cuz as u know i'm grounded. :P
i heard janay was harrasing u again about likeing me more than jus a frend sry bout that- email me, k?
hey-erm-Adam...
teehee :D
Great chapter!
add more soon!
i'm sneaking on the comp. rite now, cuz as u know i'm grounded. :P
i heard janay was harrasing u again about likeing me more than jus a frend sry bout that- email me, k?
11/15/2003 c16 Robin Mask
Story has a lot of good turns to it, deffinately one of the best chapters so far, very interesting to read.
Story has a lot of good turns to it, deffinately one of the best chapters so far, very interesting to read.
11/6/2003 c15 Kayleigh
Really kewl story Ian, but when do I get back in the picture. lol. STOP WRITING ME INTO THE STORY AS A VIOLENT PERSON! Hey, I rememebr when that happened last year in Geography! :) Lauren is based on Melissa, isnt she! You like Melissa, dont you? *shreiks exitedly* I'm going to tell her! :p
Really kewl story Ian, but when do I get back in the picture. lol. STOP WRITING ME INTO THE STORY AS A VIOLENT PERSON! Hey, I rememebr when that happened last year in Geography! :) Lauren is based on Melissa, isnt she! You like Melissa, dont you? *shreiks exitedly* I'm going to tell her! :p
11/1/2003 c15 Fenriswolf
This story gets better every chapter! The music was a nice twist to the story; I would not have the patience to search for the perfect match of song to story. I wrote a similar fiction recently which uses the the same method of using music to further the plot. It is under the the historcal fictions, labelled "Another Brick in the Wall."
This story gets better every chapter! The music was a nice twist to the story; I would not have the patience to search for the perfect match of song to story. I wrote a similar fiction recently which uses the the same method of using music to further the plot. It is under the the historcal fictions, labelled "Another Brick in the Wall."
10/27/2003 c14 River of Fire
Nice new chapter, CI. The dance chapter should be interesting. I'll just have to keep suspense at bay until then ( LTG flips suspense over his shoulder). Anyway, I have to finish up the next chapter of my story. Write more soon!
Nice new chapter, CI. The dance chapter should be interesting. I'll just have to keep suspense at bay until then ( LTG flips suspense over his shoulder). Anyway, I have to finish up the next chapter of my story. Write more soon!