for Just a Scratch8/13/2003 c7 mato nuva
Interesting...does this mean your get to choose between being human and werewolf? I read that in a good werewolf story once a little like yours-in it there's a talisman you use for the choosing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Interesting...does this mean your get to choose between being human and werewolf? I read that in a good werewolf story once a little like yours-in it there's a talisman you use for the choosing. Can't wait for the next chapter!
7/31/2003 c6 Grim Soul
Actually it was prety interesting - some of the stuff in there is quite accurate, you obvioulsy did some research, - anyway a little short but still a good chapter.
Actually it was prety interesting - some of the stuff in there is quite accurate, you obvioulsy did some research, - anyway a little short but still a good chapter.
7/28/2003 c1 
9TigreRegio
I just read the first part of this story and can't wait to read more! Any story set in Pennsylvania has a special intrest:) Huzzah! Keep up the good story!
-Ciao, TR
-In bocca al lupe!
9TigreRegioI just read the first part of this story and can't wait to read more! Any story set in Pennsylvania has a special intrest:) Huzzah! Keep up the good story!
-Ciao, TR
-In bocca al lupe!
7/5/2003 c5 5demonchild1856
Wow, this is so good. I totally want to read what happens next! Keep writing!
5demonchild1856Wow, this is so good. I totally want to read what happens next! Keep writing!
6/30/2003 c5 Anonymous
Hi, CrypticIdentity! This is mato nuva from BZ, and that's a great story. Keep up the good work. You could take the story a little less bluntly, and delve into all the nooks and crannies of werewolf, but I'm sure that will happen when Adam is doing the research. Anyway, great story! Keep it up!
Hi, CrypticIdentity! This is mato nuva from BZ, and that's a great story. Keep up the good work. You could take the story a little less bluntly, and delve into all the nooks and crannies of werewolf, but I'm sure that will happen when Adam is doing the research. Anyway, great story! Keep it up!
6/30/2003 c1 Kapola
as always, the suspence shall... and please tell me when the next chapter is up...(i just figured out how to change chapters...) great story.
i must know quote a smart person
"Keep writing"
now, i quote myself
"KUGW"
as always, the suspence shall... and please tell me when the next chapter is up...(i just figured out how to change chapters...) great story.
i must know quote a smart person
"Keep writing"
now, i quote myself
"KUGW"
6/30/2003 c5 Grim Soul
Deffinately wrote well and keeps the readers attention with each part excellently - can't wait till the next chapter.
Deffinately wrote well and keeps the readers attention with each part excellently - can't wait till the next chapter.
6/27/2003 c4 30Menarae
Hmm...it's interesting. It's one of the best first-person POVs I've seen...and I like the fact the language stayed within how a thirtheen-year-old boy would actually talk. To say the least, I'm awaiting its finish. Good job.
30MenaraeHmm...it's interesting. It's one of the best first-person POVs I've seen...and I like the fact the language stayed within how a thirtheen-year-old boy would actually talk. To say the least, I'm awaiting its finish. Good job.
6/24/2003 c3 77Simeon The Conqueror
Yes... very nice. I like the storyline. But the only flaw is that it uses the old werewolf cleche.
(Try to see me own story, Life as a Ghost)
77Simeon The ConquerorYes... very nice. I like the storyline. But the only flaw is that it uses the old werewolf cleche.
(Try to see me own story, Life as a Ghost)
6/24/2003 c3 5demonchild1856
oh, this is getting so good! i really can't wait until what adam has to go through...beinga werewolf and all...keep writing!
5demonchild1856oh, this is getting so good! i really can't wait until what adam has to go through...beinga werewolf and all...keep writing!
6/24/2003 c2 demonchild1856
wow, that's a really good story! keep on writing, i wanna know what's gonna happen to adam!
wow, that's a really good story! keep on writing, i wanna know what's gonna happen to adam!
6/23/2003 c2 doormi
It's nice. I like the way you do first-person narration.
The many "oof!" and "gr" and "BRING"s I like those. It give the text a comic relief in the midsts of this.. dark story.?
It's nice. I like the way you do first-person narration.
The many "oof!" and "gr" and "BRING"s I like those. It give the text a comic relief in the midsts of this.. dark story.?
6/19/2003 c1 Robin Mask
It is certainly original so far and seems to be well-planned, it's a great intro and easy to read - it'll be interesting to see how it goes.
It is certainly original so far and seems to be well-planned, it's a great intro and easy to read - it'll be interesting to see how it goes.