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4/17/2004 c1 2kaze-nyv
I love how you can say so much in so few words.
1/24/2004 c1 24S.R. McMahnn
absolutely beautiful description :) Very well done.
6/24/2003 c1 PainKiller
This was an extremely powerful piece. Morbid, but obviously the point you were trying to make. I thought that this was worded very well. Excellent work.
6/21/2003 c1 9Chihuahua
This was a really moving piece, albeit short.

The way you phrased everything is so bitterly truthful, that the image actually becomes real, the imagery so intense that it's overpowering.

The last sentence was the most powerful bit of all though, and I guess that was the idea.

Excellent work!
6/20/2003 c1 232karmakaze
That's really sad, but interesting to read. Good!
6/20/2003 c1 9CatieZee
Wow.

Yes, very morbid, but exceptionally well written. The kind of piece that makes you think.

Great job.

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