for The Funeral of John Doe6/24/2003 c1 PainKiller
This was an extremely powerful piece. Morbid, but obviously the point you were trying to make. I thought that this was worded very well. Excellent work.
This was an extremely powerful piece. Morbid, but obviously the point you were trying to make. I thought that this was worded very well. Excellent work.
6/21/2003 c1 
9Chihuahua
This was a really moving piece, albeit short.
The way you phrased everything is so bitterly truthful, that the image actually becomes real, the imagery so intense that it's overpowering.
The last sentence was the most powerful bit of all though, and I guess that was the idea.
Excellent work!
9ChihuahuaThis was a really moving piece, albeit short.
The way you phrased everything is so bitterly truthful, that the image actually becomes real, the imagery so intense that it's overpowering.
The last sentence was the most powerful bit of all though, and I guess that was the idea.
Excellent work!