for feel Me2/14/2004 c1 
147angel of sorrow n darkness
hey this is really good I was able to relate to it in alot of ways until the last lines about god thanks for reviewing bye mjb
147angel of sorrow n darknesshey this is really good I was able to relate to it in alot of ways until the last lines about god thanks for reviewing bye mjb
1/25/2004 c1 Colton Keith
Very good work. I like how passionate it feels. I can almost hear the thunder. Anyways, I saw your review on 'Apart'. I was a little dissapointed by that. The line and rhyming patterns would be a lot clearer to understand if I was reading them. Please review some of my other works. ;) Bye.
Very good work. I like how passionate it feels. I can almost hear the thunder. Anyways, I saw your review on 'Apart'. I was a little dissapointed by that. The line and rhyming patterns would be a lot clearer to understand if I was reading them. Please review some of my other works. ;) Bye.
1/4/2004 c1 57Tutube
A very beautifully written, and touching poem. And also very true, in our busy lives today, we often forget about the one who created us, for without Him, we would not even exist. Let us all remember to be faithful and to pray to God, for we would be nothing without him. Great poem, keep it up! ^_^
57TutubeA very beautifully written, and touching poem. And also very true, in our busy lives today, we often forget about the one who created us, for without Him, we would not even exist. Let us all remember to be faithful and to pray to God, for we would be nothing without him. Great poem, keep it up! ^_^