for So close, yet to far6/20/2003 c1 
19Andromeda
I like it, the ending especially! I like your rhyming too, it gives the poem a nice flow to it. Great job! I hope to see some more poems from you!
19AndromedaI like it, the ending especially! I like your rhyming too, it gives the poem a nice flow to it. Great job! I hope to see some more poems from you!
6/20/2003 c1 15Marshmallowz92
Well written and isn't it something so many people can relate to. Thats the reason I read it all in the first place. Its hard to tell them the truth though isn't it
15Marshmallowz92Well written and isn't it something so many people can relate to. Thats the reason I read it all in the first place. Its hard to tell them the truth though isn't it