for Paths6/23/2003 c1 Seeker of the Night
Oh... That is soo sad. Nice metaphor with the path and everything. I really like the way you describe the situation. Really nicely written. I think this poem can relate to many people. A job well done!
Oh... That is soo sad. Nice metaphor with the path and everything. I really like the way you describe the situation. Really nicely written. I think this poem can relate to many people. A job well done!
6/20/2003 c1 
20Rachjl
Wow! An amazing poem that's honest and true. I love the descriptive imagery in this poem.
The poem is also meaningful- It relates to something that happened to me about a year ago.
It's a little long but it depicts the journey that's refered to in the poem...so it works. :)
This is going on my 'favourite stories' list. Keep writing.
20RachjlWow! An amazing poem that's honest and true. I love the descriptive imagery in this poem.
The poem is also meaningful- It relates to something that happened to me about a year ago.
It's a little long but it depicts the journey that's refered to in the poem...so it works. :)
This is going on my 'favourite stories' list. Keep writing.
6/20/2003 c1 79Groovy Angel
Aw it's so sad. A very well written poem and I love the theme / metaphor in it. That last three lines really touched me.
79Groovy AngelAw it's so sad. A very well written poem and I love the theme / metaphor in it. That last three lines really touched me.