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7/18/2003 c1 4Chord
"With claws that scratch and teeth that bite /It’s not about my soul tonight"

Why do I love this line so much? Why am I at a loss on how exactly I can do this poem justice by giving it a decent review?

You're brilliant, you are. Just about sums it all up.

~chord
6/20/2003 c1 ja
wow..beautiful rhythm! great choice of words! awesome!
6/20/2003 c1 26sweetspontaneous
wow. the rhythm in this is incredible, and the rhyming, and the almost-rhymes. images amazing, love the opening lines. i -like- this; beautiful, as always.
6/20/2003 c1 bleak reality
The rhythm of this is amazing. It's got a sound like a heart beat.

"With claws that scratch and teeth that bite/It’s not about my soul tonight."

Love it.

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