for Pain6/23/2003 c1 Seeker of the Night
Wow! This is really strong! Love the metaphor!
Wow! This is really strong! Love the metaphor!
6/20/2003 c1 
14ginblossom
Excellent. You knew what you wanted to write about and you did. I love the purity of the last line. Great job.
14ginblossomExcellent. You knew what you wanted to write about and you did. I love the purity of the last line. Great job.