
6/21/2003 c1
5U2LoVeR
This is a wonderful poem. I love it. It really captures the beauty of a sunset.

This is a wonderful poem. I love it. It really captures the beauty of a sunset.
6/21/2003 c1 Dad
That's a beautiful poem, Dustmite! "Fluffy" struck me as out of place, perhaps too childish?
Well done! Keep it up!
That's a beautiful poem, Dustmite! "Fluffy" struck me as out of place, perhaps too childish?
Well done! Keep it up!
6/20/2003 c1 Tiamat
Hi MDMD! Cool poem. You're good. Crap. I wanna write like that. Gr.
Hi MDMD! Cool poem. You're good. Crap. I wanna write like that. Gr.
6/20/2003 c1
20Beau Coeur
Aw that was really good! This poem was so cute and it flowed so well. Great work, especially for it being your first uploaded work. Rock On
Beau Coeur

Aw that was really good! This poem was so cute and it flowed so well. Great work, especially for it being your first uploaded work. Rock On
Beau Coeur