for White10/11/2003 c1 Spirit Child
Hey, I found a way to write a second (better review) anyway. Really cool. All the hints were super subtle but you'd still have to be really slow not to figure out what was happening. I wish I could do that.
Hey, I found a way to write a second (better review) anyway. Really cool. All the hints were super subtle but you'd still have to be really slow not to figure out what was happening. I wish I could do that.
9/18/2003 c1 
27Spirit Child
Who. I'm still trying to decide whether its unnerving but anyway its an amazing fantastic brilliant poem along with the rest of them. I would review your stuff in a decent fashion but my vocabulary lacks any words that would do them justice so...
27Spirit ChildWho. I'm still trying to decide whether its unnerving but anyway its an amazing fantastic brilliant poem along with the rest of them. I would review your stuff in a decent fashion but my vocabulary lacks any words that would do them justice so...
8/1/2003 c1 22Neried
Did I mention that the relation to inasne asylums and macaroni comes from Rinaidran Warrior? Anyhow, it does. thanks!
22NeriedDid I mention that the relation to inasne asylums and macaroni comes from Rinaidran Warrior? Anyhow, it does. thanks!
6/23/2003 c1 128Zainab
I take this takes place in an asylum or something. That might not be what you had in mind, but oh well...^^ Another good job with the imagery (are you tired of me telling you that?) *scratches head* Oh well. This could be made into a song because of the back and forths... they add on to this piece.
128ZainabI take this takes place in an asylum or something. That might not be what you had in mind, but oh well...^^ Another good job with the imagery (are you tired of me telling you that?) *scratches head* Oh well. This could be made into a song because of the back and forths... they add on to this piece.
6/22/2003 c1 1l'orage d'absinthe
That's really cool. I LOVE your style of writing. Please write more...
1l'orage d'absintheThat's really cool. I LOVE your style of writing. Please write more...