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9/23/2003 c1 Sk8erChic
That was so sad. But at least a sort of happy ending. Very well written and intriguing, loved it!
7/16/2003 c1 Arcee
Did you plan on continuing this or was this a one-shot story? Either way, it was very well-written and I really enjoyed it. :) I thought I'd at least write a longer review (especially since most of my reviews aren't long at all and there's hardly any criticism in them), so here goes. I like the fact that each paragraph between the lyric stanza's were very short but direct and to the point. They didn't need much else. While you did use great description, it was simple and eloquent, perfect for such a short story. I suppose the only thing that I thought might have made the story better was a more detailed ending. But then again, sometimes there really isn't anything else you can say at time in your life, such as the narrator in the story. All in all, I enjoyed this story. :) Hope my review was helpful in some way.
6/29/2003 c1 lostinscotland
aww, that's so sad!

and why don't you have any reviews yet?

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