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3/11/2004 c1 31Modern Poet
This was very pretty and vivid.
3/6/2004 c1 43PainHateJusticeRaceAndLife
Wow...just wow!Your choice of words is excellent and the message your writing conveys is powerful.Very beautiful.
11/8/2003 c1 64Samara-chan
I didn't know poems about drums could be beautiful :| lol. Very nice poem... I wish I felt the same way about violin :P
7/9/2003 c1 1liquor knight
I am thinking of our teacher in third year right now...

ew...she might be our teacher again...

Sigh..wanna lose myself in a certain sweaterhead
7/3/2003 c1 8Moril
It's good. My personal instrument like that is the guitar, but that's just me...

Excellent work.
7/2/2003 c1 64not sure yet
o, definitely felt this, got really into it, muchly enjoyed this, well written with an excellent rhtym to it, beautifully done
6/23/2003 c1 NeoFight
Drums are like the heartbeat of the music itself... Beautiful poem! Music is one of the things that can most easily sway Human emotions, and drums are an essential part of that.

Eh, I'm rambling... Great poem! ^_^"
6/22/2003 c1 lostinscotland
ooh, i likes. i love drums, tho i don't play them. i have two drummer friends, tho, and am fascinated watching them play...

great work!
6/22/2003 c1 Needa S
Cool..Awesome job!
6/22/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
that's great... i love the language you've used and it captures that endorphin rush you get from playing an instrument... if you didn't live so far away, i'd invite you over for a jam,
6/21/2003 c1 176DefianceIsMe
Wow...this is some powerful stuff...Throughout the piece I imagined a drummer going at it passionately with all his heart...particularly this one drummer guy i know...
6/21/2003 c1 169Siberia82
Would you believe me if I said I was listening to a traditional, percussion-rich Maori song when I stumbled your poem? What a coincidence! Your words flow so beautifully (especially with the fantastic music playing in the background!) This is one of my favourite pieces.
6/21/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
That was awesome work. My brother plays the drums.

~Heart of the Sword
6/21/2003 c1 anon63
beautiful rhythm... ya i know that feeling... music can be excellent...

:-)
6/21/2003 c1 48Someone Out There Cares
I thought it was beautiful how you described your feeling. IT was all perfect: the rhythm, the words, everthing. Great job!

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