12/14/2005 c2 12Moonlite Star
Interesting start! I look forward to updates. :)

I will admit...it did take me a while to grasp everything that was going on, but I did finally manage. :)

And...I saw on your profile that your favorite TV shows are Alias and Dark Angel. The exact same is true for me! =D It was unfortunate that they had to cancel DA :(

And now Alias.

Anyways, I hope you continue this story. =D Update asap.

7/13/2003 c2 7Valkyrie
I DID notice the 'left hand with the tv' thing :p Lol, great chapter. You are really good with dialouge! Keep it up and update soon!