for Traces of the Past!5/25/2004 c25 
11DreamNightmare
hey julesz lol im in hmrm...go figure...neways nice update...cant wait 4 more ^-^...lylas late
Skyerz
11DreamNightmarehey julesz lol im in hmrm...go figure...neways nice update...cant wait 4 more ^-^...lylas late
Skyerz
5/25/2004 c25 5Chelsea Plum
OMG...She updated! lol (now if only i could say the same for me...haha)
I loved your update! Garret is still my favorite..and John is finally back! I think Hope is gonna die..lol(j/m)
You MUST update this soon! (if you can)...uh..yea! UPDATE!
Love ya!
Chelsea xoxo
5Chelsea PlumOMG...She updated! lol (now if only i could say the same for me...haha)
I loved your update! Garret is still my favorite..and John is finally back! I think Hope is gonna die..lol(j/m)
You MUST update this soon! (if you can)...uh..yea! UPDATE!
Love ya!
Chelsea xoxo
5/24/2004 c25 1cuecumber
bummer. you are so cruel - HOW CAN YOU LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT? Anyhow, I love the plot. I'm in love with Garret, too. *smiles* keep writing! I hope you update soon. *wink*
1cuecumberbummer. you are so cruel - HOW CAN YOU LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT? Anyhow, I love the plot. I'm in love with Garret, too. *smiles* keep writing! I hope you update soon. *wink*
4/25/2004 c24 sweetie
Hey you did an awesome job! I immedietly put you on my author alerts and cant wait to read more!
Hey you did an awesome job! I immedietly put you on my author alerts and cant wait to read more!
4/9/2004 c24 Alleyna
Holy! I knew it! Damn bastard raped her. I just knew it. Coloured contacts man, they're everywhere. I love the last chapters. Sorry it's taken me so long to review, I finally got my computer. Our last one broke. Three months and no computer. A girl goes nuts when she can't write her story, or read her favourite story. ;)
You did awesomely awesome on this story. I can't wait to see what's coming up next. Is John away because he's in trouble with the law or is he confused about Anna, not really knowing what to do. I am peeved at him though for leaving Hope there to do all this on her own.
Oh and Garett! That was so sweet. So romantic the way he visits her everyday. It makes me a little jealous how you seem to always make the perfect guy. And Stephen is a creepy SOB. 'Take care of that baby of mine Hope,' creepy bastard. It just pisses me off to hear that somebody could do that.
Anyway, love your story and I can't wait to read the next chapter. There were a few spelling and grammar errors just to let you know, so be a little more watchful next time, but there weren't a lot, so that's good. Love the suspense by the way. The way you end your chapters is phenominal really. Heehee. I'm blabbing anyway. Can't blame a girl when she's in love with a story though for talking endlessly about it. ;);)
Keep up the good work!
Alleyna
Holy! I knew it! Damn bastard raped her. I just knew it. Coloured contacts man, they're everywhere. I love the last chapters. Sorry it's taken me so long to review, I finally got my computer. Our last one broke. Three months and no computer. A girl goes nuts when she can't write her story, or read her favourite story. ;)
You did awesomely awesome on this story. I can't wait to see what's coming up next. Is John away because he's in trouble with the law or is he confused about Anna, not really knowing what to do. I am peeved at him though for leaving Hope there to do all this on her own.
Oh and Garett! That was so sweet. So romantic the way he visits her everyday. It makes me a little jealous how you seem to always make the perfect guy. And Stephen is a creepy SOB. 'Take care of that baby of mine Hope,' creepy bastard. It just pisses me off to hear that somebody could do that.
Anyway, love your story and I can't wait to read the next chapter. There were a few spelling and grammar errors just to let you know, so be a little more watchful next time, but there weren't a lot, so that's good. Love the suspense by the way. The way you end your chapters is phenominal really. Heehee. I'm blabbing anyway. Can't blame a girl when she's in love with a story though for talking endlessly about it. ;);)
Keep up the good work!
Alleyna
4/9/2004 c24 1Cherry-Sap
wow...this took me a LONG time to read this. but i loved it! this is the greatest thing i've ever read! ur such an awesome author! this is just so great! heh yeah okay i'm done now v_v
Sap
1Cherry-Sapwow...this took me a LONG time to read this. but i loved it! this is the greatest thing i've ever read! ur such an awesome author! this is just so great! heh yeah okay i'm done now v_v
Sap
4/8/2004 c24 Alyson Trotter
GARRET! he's back and so sweet. and i luv the whole hate relationship turned love relationship thing. OH! their first xmas! how sweet! i figure it won't be this peachy forever but please let them have their xmas!
i still think it's possible to write Stephan off a cliff but if this is all i get...i'll take it! lol! i knew it was him! but i just wondered if she didn't recognize him from a shock type thing or what when he first attacked her. cause i could see that happening. i hope he's gone for good. and i feel bad for hope since she'll probably have to be a witness for the trial.
i'll tell you, john the ex con is just not gonna work for me. nope nope nope. not with hope and anna and his parents and garret... well, as long as it works out in the end...
and officer lloyd. let me guess...he's got a daughter that was attacked too? just my guess, probably wrong though!
anyway that's my little review and please update soon! by the way, i just went and read over my review again and if it's seems a little uh randomn and all over...that's because it is! anyway great chapter and keep writing! by the way, does the story go all the way to the very first chapter with joshua being 5 or till she has the baby and then i skips ahead 5 years? oh and what about the wedding! and isn't it suppose to be a girl not a boy like in the prolouge! so much to happen still can't wait!
GARRET! he's back and so sweet. and i luv the whole hate relationship turned love relationship thing. OH! their first xmas! how sweet! i figure it won't be this peachy forever but please let them have their xmas!
i still think it's possible to write Stephan off a cliff but if this is all i get...i'll take it! lol! i knew it was him! but i just wondered if she didn't recognize him from a shock type thing or what when he first attacked her. cause i could see that happening. i hope he's gone for good. and i feel bad for hope since she'll probably have to be a witness for the trial.
i'll tell you, john the ex con is just not gonna work for me. nope nope nope. not with hope and anna and his parents and garret... well, as long as it works out in the end...
and officer lloyd. let me guess...he's got a daughter that was attacked too? just my guess, probably wrong though!
anyway that's my little review and please update soon! by the way, i just went and read over my review again and if it's seems a little uh randomn and all over...that's because it is! anyway great chapter and keep writing! by the way, does the story go all the way to the very first chapter with joshua being 5 or till she has the baby and then i skips ahead 5 years? oh and what about the wedding! and isn't it suppose to be a girl not a boy like in the prolouge! so much to happen still can't wait!
4/7/2004 c24 11DreamNightmare
hey nice chapter...stupid stephen...came rite out n said it...dumbass hehe neways...cant wait til the next 1...im workin on my stories at the moment...lylas late
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmarehey nice chapter...stupid stephen...came rite out n said it...dumbass hehe neways...cant wait til the next 1...im workin on my stories at the moment...lylas late
DreamNightmare
4/6/2004 c24 12Little Mermaid
YAY GARRET! YOU SO ROCK MY WORLD RIGHT NOW...well for the next 2 hours or so until i head off to bed anyways. is that all they do though? i mean i get hte principle of hte whole thing...but can't they have like this whole fiery passionate thing happening...anytime soon by any chance? what happened to john? case? what case? more angst? poor hope you just gotta feel for her. i really guess you have no life lolzz naw i'm sure you make time to write this much (and if you don't have a life i'm glad and unglad that you don't if you catch my drift...)
update asap
12Little MermaidYAY GARRET! YOU SO ROCK MY WORLD RIGHT NOW...well for the next 2 hours or so until i head off to bed anyways. is that all they do though? i mean i get hte principle of hte whole thing...but can't they have like this whole fiery passionate thing happening...anytime soon by any chance? what happened to john? case? what case? more angst? poor hope you just gotta feel for her. i really guess you have no life lolzz naw i'm sure you make time to write this much (and if you don't have a life i'm glad and unglad that you don't if you catch my drift...)
update asap
4/5/2004 c24 7goo goo ga ga 00
great chapter...
i am very glad that garret and hope are finally together...i think it is soo sweet how garret is with hope...supporting and loving her
very very very glad that they found the rapist and arrested him...i had a sneaky suspicion that is was stephen...sicko...
anyways update soon
7goo goo ga ga 00great chapter...
i am very glad that garret and hope are finally together...i think it is soo sweet how garret is with hope...supporting and loving her
very very very glad that they found the rapist and arrested him...i had a sneaky suspicion that is was stephen...sicko...
anyways update soon
4/4/2004 c24 5Chelsea Plum
Hey!
GREAT UPDATE! I almost cried! lol!...I'm so happy you FINALLY put Garret with Hope...ooh::smiles::..its too cute..lol..anyway make sure ya update soon!
LYLAS!
The Plummer
5Chelsea PlumHey!
GREAT UPDATE! I almost cried! lol!...I'm so happy you FINALLY put Garret with Hope...ooh::smiles::..its too cute..lol..anyway make sure ya update soon!
LYLAS!
The Plummer
4/3/2004 c24 28Shadow of the Light
Wow, I'm so glad that Garret is back, you're absolutely right, he was soo sweet/cute in this chapter. I hate to sound so emotional but I was literally shaking with excitement upon seeing that this chap was posted. I hope now that Hope knows it was Stephen it brings her some peace, I knew from the start there was something fake about that guy. But wow, even though I was pretty sure I had figured it out it was a whole nother story reading it! And Hope's reaction, I feel so sorry for her, but I'm so glad that you have Garret there to help her through.
John, wow, four months, now you've got my mind spinning even more, specially with the police asking about him. Its interesting having dirt on John finally being brought to life. But still, poor John, although I must admit I'm hard pressed to feel to sorry for him at this point, I'm more reserved. He's obviously done or been a part of something, and he knows it...why else leave you're family for four months. But now I wonder what's Garret's role in it? is her just an informant, a link John keeps for stats on his family, or is it more?
Its so hard to tell with your stories, which is one of the many things that makes them soo superb!
That last part with Justin, I'll admitt it, I blinked back tears, thats right! The poor guy, I hope he, I dunno, finds happiness? He hasn't been one to strike me as a suspicious person...oh uh character in the least. But I don't pity him, no I think its more along the lines of trying to sympathize with him.
Wow, I think this is my longest review yet! What can I say, nothing much in my defence. Least to say I loved the chapter! But I'll be praying that the next update comes soon, because I really want to read more! With all of this I bide you Adieu (I think thats how its spelt)! Until next time, ttfn! =^_^=
Shadow
28Shadow of the LightWow, I'm so glad that Garret is back, you're absolutely right, he was soo sweet/cute in this chapter. I hate to sound so emotional but I was literally shaking with excitement upon seeing that this chap was posted. I hope now that Hope knows it was Stephen it brings her some peace, I knew from the start there was something fake about that guy. But wow, even though I was pretty sure I had figured it out it was a whole nother story reading it! And Hope's reaction, I feel so sorry for her, but I'm so glad that you have Garret there to help her through.
John, wow, four months, now you've got my mind spinning even more, specially with the police asking about him. Its interesting having dirt on John finally being brought to life. But still, poor John, although I must admit I'm hard pressed to feel to sorry for him at this point, I'm more reserved. He's obviously done or been a part of something, and he knows it...why else leave you're family for four months. But now I wonder what's Garret's role in it? is her just an informant, a link John keeps for stats on his family, or is it more?
Its so hard to tell with your stories, which is one of the many things that makes them soo superb!
That last part with Justin, I'll admitt it, I blinked back tears, thats right! The poor guy, I hope he, I dunno, finds happiness? He hasn't been one to strike me as a suspicious person...oh uh character in the least. But I don't pity him, no I think its more along the lines of trying to sympathize with him.
Wow, I think this is my longest review yet! What can I say, nothing much in my defence. Least to say I loved the chapter! But I'll be praying that the next update comes soon, because I really want to read more! With all of this I bide you Adieu (I think thats how its spelt)! Until next time, ttfn! =^_^=
Shadow
3/22/2004 c23 Keeper of the Forest
One love the story. Two Show? Three Love the story and wish you would update soon as i would like to know if my hunch is correct concerning Stephen Four Could you perhaps look at some of my stories any reviews would be very appriciative. Pardon my spelling.
Keeper
One love the story. Two Show? Three Love the story and wish you would update soon as i would like to know if my hunch is correct concerning Stephen Four Could you perhaps look at some of my stories any reviews would be very appriciative. Pardon my spelling.
Keeper