
3/2/2004 c23
12Little Mermaid
whoa baby did you write quite a bit in one day! i so did NOT love the fact that garret wasn't in this chapter. i miss the guy...it's a painful separation for me. it breaks my heart in two just waiting for him to reappear. cant he come visit her in the hospital or something...ANYTHING will suffice by now. that stephen thing...how did i know that was coming? i'm psychic by the way...
why did john leave home? did he really have to? what's he in trouble for...or gonna get in trouble for? i hate the suspense. let's just move right on through to the happy garret moments...and you know, i end up reading these things like months apart, so this is totally killing me that i only have one chapter to read sniff sniff jpjp this was one hell of a long chapter...keep it up b/c i'm loving it
update asap

whoa baby did you write quite a bit in one day! i so did NOT love the fact that garret wasn't in this chapter. i miss the guy...it's a painful separation for me. it breaks my heart in two just waiting for him to reappear. cant he come visit her in the hospital or something...ANYTHING will suffice by now. that stephen thing...how did i know that was coming? i'm psychic by the way...
why did john leave home? did he really have to? what's he in trouble for...or gonna get in trouble for? i hate the suspense. let's just move right on through to the happy garret moments...and you know, i end up reading these things like months apart, so this is totally killing me that i only have one chapter to read sniff sniff jpjp this was one hell of a long chapter...keep it up b/c i'm loving it
update asap
2/28/2004 c23 kgcyglu
I loved the chapter. I can't wait until the next. You have to update soon. I am going to die of suspense if you don't. Plese, update soon. Thank You.
~ck
I loved the chapter. I can't wait until the next. You have to update soon. I am going to die of suspense if you don't. Plese, update soon. Thank You.
~ck
2/25/2004 c23
5Chelsea Plum
I never reviewed for your last chapter! AH...It twas a good chapter...and just for the record...I HATE STEPHEN! He is a bastard and a whole [Not a half]! UGH!
I loved this chapter...I'm still rooting for Garret...and I know he aiint the bad guy! It's that damnable bastrad Stephen!
Anyway signing out...UPDATE SOON!
Chelsea xoxo

I never reviewed for your last chapter! AH...It twas a good chapter...and just for the record...I HATE STEPHEN! He is a bastard and a whole [Not a half]! UGH!
I loved this chapter...I'm still rooting for Garret...and I know he aiint the bad guy! It's that damnable bastrad Stephen!
Anyway signing out...UPDATE SOON!
Chelsea xoxo
2/24/2004 c23
28Shadow of the Light
I loved the chap, though I must admit the end worries me. I'm very curious as to how Stephen will take to being questioned by the cops and all...Whats John gotten into as well? and when's Garret going to make another appearance? Well unfortunaltely I can't make this very long so I'll leave it at that, until the next chap, ttfn! =^_^=
Shadow

I loved the chap, though I must admit the end worries me. I'm very curious as to how Stephen will take to being questioned by the cops and all...Whats John gotten into as well? and when's Garret going to make another appearance? Well unfortunaltely I can't make this very long so I'll leave it at that, until the next chap, ttfn! =^_^=
Shadow
2/23/2004 c23
11DreamNightmare
lalala...how interesting lol i dont remember that part in brand new's song...but o well...i g2 do my sci lab now nice chappie lylas late
DreamNightmare

lalala...how interesting lol i dont remember that part in brand new's song...but o well...i g2 do my sci lab now nice chappie lylas late
DreamNightmare
2/22/2004 c23 Kate
Wow! amazing story, i stayed up till 1:20 to read this, please update soon i wanna kno what happens next.
Wow! amazing story, i stayed up till 1:20 to read this, please update soon i wanna kno what happens next.
2/22/2004 c23 Alyson Trotter
Stephan...gr...i hate him so much. hope should punch him. yeah that would be a great way to let out all that extreme teenage angst. and are we gonna see more of the cops soon? LLoyde seems like he's hiding something. dun dun dun! j/k. and yes, i did love your last chapter. lol! this one too! as for john, no don't have him in trouble! the baby can't have uncle john the ex-con. hey that rhymes! lol! and i do not see how this will get any worse. this girl is seriously having the worst senior year i've ever heard of. but i loved the chapter and update soon! yeah, i think thats all. no...wait...there's something else. o yeah, Garret. *glare* i feel you have taken him out to purposely torture us all and i will take a vow of silence if he's missing once more... naw, i couldn't do that to ya! it's too good a story. but i will be extremely sad. :( *sniff*. just hurry up and update and don't feel to bad for writing stephan off a cliff or something. we'd all understand...;) to bad that will never happen!
Stephan...gr...i hate him so much. hope should punch him. yeah that would be a great way to let out all that extreme teenage angst. and are we gonna see more of the cops soon? LLoyde seems like he's hiding something. dun dun dun! j/k. and yes, i did love your last chapter. lol! this one too! as for john, no don't have him in trouble! the baby can't have uncle john the ex-con. hey that rhymes! lol! and i do not see how this will get any worse. this girl is seriously having the worst senior year i've ever heard of. but i loved the chapter and update soon! yeah, i think thats all. no...wait...there's something else. o yeah, Garret. *glare* i feel you have taken him out to purposely torture us all and i will take a vow of silence if he's missing once more... naw, i couldn't do that to ya! it's too good a story. but i will be extremely sad. :( *sniff*. just hurry up and update and don't feel to bad for writing stephan off a cliff or something. we'd all understand...;) to bad that will never happen!
1/14/2004 c22 ashado
This story is absolutely wonderful! I just don't know how to describe it with anything else. I can't wait until the next chapter!
This story is absolutely wonderful! I just don't know how to describe it with anything else. I can't wait until the next chapter!
1/11/2004 c22 Alleyna
AWESOME! That's all I can say. Just awesome. But... what's wrong with her? I hope she's ok. It's most likely a stated of shock and fear, plus stress. I hope she's ok.
AWESOME! That's all I can say. Just awesome. But... what's wrong with her? I hope she's ok. It's most likely a stated of shock and fear, plus stress. I hope she's ok.
1/11/2004 c22
1Sarah Yearwood
Aw...But I wanna read it! Oh well, I'll wait. Well, I can't wait, but I will. PLEASE put Garett in the next chapter...He's so nice. I still don't like Stephen though. But I know what's going to happen...If she finds the rapist, is she going to report him? I WANNA KNOW...Ah well, I'll wait like everyone else.
Gotta go!
CIAO!
*Countess De Lioncourt*

Aw...But I wanna read it! Oh well, I'll wait. Well, I can't wait, but I will. PLEASE put Garett in the next chapter...He's so nice. I still don't like Stephen though. But I know what's going to happen...If she finds the rapist, is she going to report him? I WANNA KNOW...Ah well, I'll wait like everyone else.
Gotta go!
CIAO!
*Countess De Lioncourt*
1/8/2004 c22 Alyson Trotter
i have to say that if Hope falls one more time that baby's gonna come out all dented or something! anyway, no garret, i'm sad, make it up to me next time, or else, just kidding! lol! oh, and by the way i'd just like to say i was the first true Garret fan *ducks as rotten food is thrown at head* Fine, fine, fine. not the first but the biggest fan. *ducks as LARGE pieces of rotten food are thrown* yeah yeah w/e. lol! anyway update as soon as possible cause this is the absolute best!
i have to say that if Hope falls one more time that baby's gonna come out all dented or something! anyway, no garret, i'm sad, make it up to me next time, or else, just kidding! lol! oh, and by the way i'd just like to say i was the first true Garret fan *ducks as rotten food is thrown at head* Fine, fine, fine. not the first but the biggest fan. *ducks as LARGE pieces of rotten food are thrown* yeah yeah w/e. lol! anyway update as soon as possible cause this is the absolute best!
1/8/2004 c22
6tHe LiGhT fRoM tHe ShAdOwS
Nice chapter! Love it even more! (:
PLEASE update soon! can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm on the edge after ever chapter, keep it up!

Nice chapter! Love it even more! (:
PLEASE update soon! can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm on the edge after ever chapter, keep it up!
1/2/2004 c22 ck
I loved the chapter. I hope Hope did not lose the baby when she fell. I can't wait to see what happens with Stephen. Update as soon as you can. Thank You.
I loved the chapter. I hope Hope did not lose the baby when she fell. I can't wait to see what happens with Stephen. Update as soon as you can. Thank You.
1/2/2004 c22 JazzeeT
it turned out alrite...onceu get started writing its all good... so no garret *taps foot* im waiting for garret and whats with john taking off.. is hope going to miscarry..and is she showing yet.. update soon.
it turned out alrite...onceu get started writing its all good... so no garret *taps foot* im waiting for garret and whats with john taking off.. is hope going to miscarry..and is she showing yet.. update soon.