for Traces of the Past!1/2/2004 c22 
11DreamNightmare
hey woman...nice endin 2 the chapter...it came out pretty well...rnt u glad 2 have been able 2 talk 2 me las nite? kk im bein cocky lol neways nice ch. ill be waitin 4 the next lylas late
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmarehey woman...nice endin 2 the chapter...it came out pretty well...rnt u glad 2 have been able 2 talk 2 me las nite? kk im bein cocky lol neways nice ch. ill be waitin 4 the next lylas late
DreamNightmare
1/1/2004 c22 12Little Mermaid
can we please get garret back in this story? i'm missing him already. and it's only been one chapter. how come she keeps fainting? is something wrong with the baby? does she have diabetes? cause people with something with sugar or something faint...i'm not sure of all the details and all that junk. i'm glad you got past your writer's block. it's okay this took a long time and about the homework thing, i've been thinking, burning the homework seems like a good idea. just make a huge bonfire and burn every last piece (especially since vacation is almost over and i haven't done ANY of my homework)
update asap
12Little Mermaidcan we please get garret back in this story? i'm missing him already. and it's only been one chapter. how come she keeps fainting? is something wrong with the baby? does she have diabetes? cause people with something with sugar or something faint...i'm not sure of all the details and all that junk. i'm glad you got past your writer's block. it's okay this took a long time and about the homework thing, i've been thinking, burning the homework seems like a good idea. just make a huge bonfire and burn every last piece (especially since vacation is almost over and i haven't done ANY of my homework)
update asap
12/13/2003 c21 37kittyfay
OMG!
okay,
All through the chapters I was like ITS STEPHEN! HE RAPED YOU!
and he has grey eyes? it is him isnt it!
I want more stuff to happen to Hope and Garret. He HAS to be feeling extreamly worked up by what Hope was doing to him.
Well just letting you know that I love this story and can you PLEASE update soon?
THANK YOU!
ciao
37kittyfayOMG!
okay,
All through the chapters I was like ITS STEPHEN! HE RAPED YOU!
and he has grey eyes? it is him isnt it!
I want more stuff to happen to Hope and Garret. He HAS to be feeling extreamly worked up by what Hope was doing to him.
Well just letting you know that I love this story and can you PLEASE update soon?
THANK YOU!
ciao
12/9/2003 c21 12Little Mermaid
another really amazing song. is it just me, or do you have absolutely amazing tastes in songs? but anyways, of course i totally enjoyed that little game they played. if only garret could have put together a more coherent answer...maybe next time. he might actually be able to throw hope off guard, but i doubt it. hahahaha, she really could blame this whole damn thing on hormones.
and i hope your crazyy mind takes this story to a wonderfully happy...and of course very funny place. as soon as the whole storm is over...
update asap
12Little Mermaidanother really amazing song. is it just me, or do you have absolutely amazing tastes in songs? but anyways, of course i totally enjoyed that little game they played. if only garret could have put together a more coherent answer...maybe next time. he might actually be able to throw hope off guard, but i doubt it. hahahaha, she really could blame this whole damn thing on hormones.
and i hope your crazyy mind takes this story to a wonderfully happy...and of course very funny place. as soon as the whole storm is over...
update asap
12/6/2003 c21 bridgette261
OMG! let me start off by saying that i LOVE LOVE LOVE your fic! *adds fic to favs* i read it all in one sitting...don't i feel special...lolz. i kinda feel a bit sad for Hope...i mean, it's not like she ASKED to be raped so she can become pregnant...about the Stephen thing...i know you probably won't tell me because all the authors with the good stories are evil, but is he the raper? lolz. i like Garret, he seems sweet. i love the fact that in the beginning of the story, you just TELL your readers that in the end, Garret and Hope will end up together. i'm not too fond of mysteries in series because i LOVE being able to turn to the last page of the book and read the ending before i even finish the fic. i know that i seem like i'm just writing a run-on sentence...sorry if i don't make any sense...i usually don't when i'm typing really fast...i just need to get all my thoughts out...yea. and about anna...i'm just gonna assume she was your 100th reviewer...in either this chapter or the previous one, you said something about Hope knowing Anna for a while. i realize that just recently you added Anna into the story, but you made them sorta seem like best friends. what about April? she doesn't seem to make as many appearances since the breakup with what's-his-name (i seriously forget, lolz. i have this reading comprehension problem i seriously need to work on)...aren't best friends supposed to be in almost every other scene? that reminds me, have you ever seen "How to Deal"? or read the book? it contains a pregnant girl, but she's not the main character...her BEST FREIND is...lolz. just trying to emphasize a point...well, if you haven't read "How to Deal" yet, i really suggest that you read it. Sarah Dessen is one of my favorite authors! Okay, i think I wrote enough to be equivilent to reviews five chapters...at least that's what it seems to me...unless you're aiming for higher statistics or something...i don't think i'm making any sense right now, am I? well...i hope you update soon! here's an incentive: I'll review more! lolz.
-Katherine
OMG! let me start off by saying that i LOVE LOVE LOVE your fic! *adds fic to favs* i read it all in one sitting...don't i feel special...lolz. i kinda feel a bit sad for Hope...i mean, it's not like she ASKED to be raped so she can become pregnant...about the Stephen thing...i know you probably won't tell me because all the authors with the good stories are evil, but is he the raper? lolz. i like Garret, he seems sweet. i love the fact that in the beginning of the story, you just TELL your readers that in the end, Garret and Hope will end up together. i'm not too fond of mysteries in series because i LOVE being able to turn to the last page of the book and read the ending before i even finish the fic. i know that i seem like i'm just writing a run-on sentence...sorry if i don't make any sense...i usually don't when i'm typing really fast...i just need to get all my thoughts out...yea. and about anna...i'm just gonna assume she was your 100th reviewer...in either this chapter or the previous one, you said something about Hope knowing Anna for a while. i realize that just recently you added Anna into the story, but you made them sorta seem like best friends. what about April? she doesn't seem to make as many appearances since the breakup with what's-his-name (i seriously forget, lolz. i have this reading comprehension problem i seriously need to work on)...aren't best friends supposed to be in almost every other scene? that reminds me, have you ever seen "How to Deal"? or read the book? it contains a pregnant girl, but she's not the main character...her BEST FREIND is...lolz. just trying to emphasize a point...well, if you haven't read "How to Deal" yet, i really suggest that you read it. Sarah Dessen is one of my favorite authors! Okay, i think I wrote enough to be equivilent to reviews five chapters...at least that's what it seems to me...unless you're aiming for higher statistics or something...i don't think i'm making any sense right now, am I? well...i hope you update soon! here's an incentive: I'll review more! lolz.
-Katherine
12/6/2003 c21 JazzeeT
ur chaps are geting long and nice... ah two gurls two guys.. oo the possibilities.. update soon gurll the holidays are coming and i might be able to read even quickly hehe
ur chaps are geting long and nice... ah two gurls two guys.. oo the possibilities.. update soon gurll the holidays are coming and i might be able to read even quickly hehe
12/6/2003 c20 JazzeeT
hey reviewing! great and long chap i like i like.. and i see she is going to spill to anna i l ike her.. hopefully she proves to be a trustful friend..
hey reviewing! great and long chap i like i like.. and i see she is going to spill to anna i l ike her.. hopefully she proves to be a trustful friend..
12/4/2003 c21 2tweetie-pie16
omg this story is brill!
is stephen the guy who raped hope?
are hope and garret gona get 2gether?
i hope they do
either way this story is tops congrats
luv tweetie x
2tweetie-pie16omg this story is brill!
is stephen the guy who raped hope?
are hope and garret gona get 2gether?
i hope they do
either way this story is tops congrats
luv tweetie x
12/3/2003 c21 Alyson Trotter
If that was just and excerpt I would stop reading right now! Just kidding! I couldn't if I wanted to. And I have to say what leads to them getting together (which better happen in the end!)and everything turning into the calm after the storm is so good! If you haven't noticed yet I really like the character of Garret, but really it must be because I HATE Stephan. I'm sticking with him being the mysterious caller because he's just creepy I don't care what Hope thinks about him being "comfortable" he's no the right guy! How can she kiss Stephan and not think of the evil orange eye'd guy like with Garret. I know, it's because subconsiencly (sp?) she KNOWS Garret's for her. Okay gotta go watch the OC and you better update soon. Because I LOVE this story. Oh and Anna's awesome and she and John better get together quicker than Garret and Hope. Just kidding!
If that was just and excerpt I would stop reading right now! Just kidding! I couldn't if I wanted to. And I have to say what leads to them getting together (which better happen in the end!)and everything turning into the calm after the storm is so good! If you haven't noticed yet I really like the character of Garret, but really it must be because I HATE Stephan. I'm sticking with him being the mysterious caller because he's just creepy I don't care what Hope thinks about him being "comfortable" he's no the right guy! How can she kiss Stephan and not think of the evil orange eye'd guy like with Garret. I know, it's because subconsiencly (sp?) she KNOWS Garret's for her. Okay gotta go watch the OC and you better update soon. Because I LOVE this story. Oh and Anna's awesome and she and John better get together quicker than Garret and Hope. Just kidding!
12/2/2003 c21 Alleyna
One little song: All you need is love, love. All you need is love.
Awesome chapter. Love the teasing and provocative put ons. Just great.
Now I feel like my suspicions are coming true. Is Stephen the (insert really mean word) that raped her? I hope so then she can kick his ass and tell him to go to hell. He prank called her to break up with Justin and was hoping to get her to go to him. Hehe... I hope I'm right. I don't like him.
One little song: All you need is love, love. All you need is love.
Awesome chapter. Love the teasing and provocative put ons. Just great.
Now I feel like my suspicions are coming true. Is Stephen the (insert really mean word) that raped her? I hope so then she can kick his ass and tell him to go to hell. He prank called her to break up with Justin and was hoping to get her to go to him. Hehe... I hope I'm right. I don't like him.
12/2/2003 c21 6MelanieJan
That was great. I can't wait to read the next chapter...hope you update soon. :D:D:D
6MelanieJanThat was great. I can't wait to read the next chapter...hope you update soon. :D:D:D
12/2/2003 c21 ck
You have to update soon. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen. I think my suspicions are correct. Please update soon. I liked the chapter, and how long it was. Thanks.
You have to update soon. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen. I think my suspicions are correct. Please update soon. I liked the chapter, and how long it was. Thanks.
12/2/2003 c21 11DreamNightmare
u no...im really thinkin its stephen now...i did from the start 4 sum reason but now i really think that! gina agrees lol cuz im talkin 2 her at skool now HA! lol g2g tho lylas late
DreamNightmare
11DreamNightmareu no...im really thinkin its stephen now...i did from the start 4 sum reason but now i really think that! gina agrees lol cuz im talkin 2 her at skool now HA! lol g2g tho lylas late
DreamNightmare
12/1/2003 c21 5Chelsea Plum
I LOVE THAT SONG! omg! lol You have no idea how much i love that song! I sing it at school ALL the time! lol.. anyways onto my review!
LOVEDTHE CHAPTER! With each chapter i love Garret more and more! lol ::Hits herself with the nutcracker:: I'm falling in love with a fcitonal character! Pathetice huh?
Anna is so awesome! Her "sexuality" and John's arrogantness is so...amusing lol.
Hope on the other hand is down right EVIL! lol EVIL! E-V-I-L! But i love her too.
I don't like Stephen because i know he did it. And that's GROSS! anyways...
UPDATE SOON!
lylas!
Chelsea
5Chelsea PlumI LOVE THAT SONG! omg! lol You have no idea how much i love that song! I sing it at school ALL the time! lol.. anyways onto my review!
LOVEDTHE CHAPTER! With each chapter i love Garret more and more! lol ::Hits herself with the nutcracker:: I'm falling in love with a fcitonal character! Pathetice huh?
Anna is so awesome! Her "sexuality" and John's arrogantness is so...amusing lol.
Hope on the other hand is down right EVIL! lol EVIL! E-V-I-L! But i love her too.
I don't like Stephen because i know he did it. And that's GROSS! anyways...
UPDATE SOON!
lylas!
Chelsea