for Sonnets of the Seasons3/11/2004 c4 
31Modern Poet
Bravo! The metaphors and personifications are exellent! These are so professional and exhilerating to read! They deserve to be published!
31Modern PoetBravo! The metaphors and personifications are exellent! These are so professional and exhilerating to read! They deserve to be published!
11/23/2003 c4 Desert Wrath
O_O...WOW! King Winter doesn't seem to nice, lol. That was a great description of winter. I felt cold just reading this poem. Well, actually, it could have been the fac that it is winter, but... You're a very talented writer! Keep on writing!
-Desert Wrath
O_O...WOW! King Winter doesn't seem to nice, lol. That was a great description of winter. I felt cold just reading this poem. Well, actually, it could have been the fac that it is winter, but... You're a very talented writer! Keep on writing!
-Desert Wrath
11/23/2003 c3 Desert Wrath
Autumn was described very well in this poem. I liked how autumn was described as a princess! This was a great poem!
-Desert Wrath
Autumn was described very well in this poem. I liked how autumn was described as a princess! This was a great poem!
-Desert Wrath
11/23/2003 c2 Desert Wrath
I really like how summer was described! I also liked how summer was characterized as a prince. Great work!
-Desert Wrath
I really like how summer was described! I also liked how summer was characterized as a prince. Great work!
-Desert Wrath
11/23/2003 c1 Desert Wrath
This poem sent many great images of spring to my mind! I also liked how spring was characterized into a queen. Great work!
-Desert Wrath
This poem sent many great images of spring to my mind! I also liked how spring was characterized into a queen. Great work!
-Desert Wrath
10/13/2003 c1 2Mignon Dupont
Oh Joy of joys! THIS IS SUCH A PRETTY POEM! ^_^ I love it, write more poems! Nature poems are always...so...good. *faints*
2Mignon DupontOh Joy of joys! THIS IS SUCH A PRETTY POEM! ^_^ I love it, write more poems! Nature poems are always...so...good. *faints*
10/5/2003 c4 17Timberly Rey
Beautiful, I love them all. They are all very good, with good visualizations and wording. Thank you for posting them, and thank you for the review of my poem. -Timberly
17Timberly ReyBeautiful, I love them all. They are all very good, with good visualizations and wording. Thank you for posting them, and thank you for the review of my poem. -Timberly
9/24/2003 c1 amicusveritas
Well done...as are all of your writings I have read thus far...Spring is indeed a time of renewal...in the natural world...animals give birth in the spring...on a natural cycle inherent in the genes of the animal world...had a feeling you might tie that in...include it...as always...enjoyed your work..thank you, amicus...
Well done...as are all of your writings I have read thus far...Spring is indeed a time of renewal...in the natural world...animals give birth in the spring...on a natural cycle inherent in the genes of the animal world...had a feeling you might tie that in...include it...as always...enjoyed your work..thank you, amicus...
9/21/2003 c1 32MyGodReigns
This is really awesome! I find it difficult to write such long poetry but you do it with flowing grace and descriptions to spark the mind. Beautiful.
*~CQ White Oleander CQ~*
32MyGodReignsThis is really awesome! I find it difficult to write such long poetry but you do it with flowing grace and descriptions to spark the mind. Beautiful.
*~CQ White Oleander CQ~*
9/6/2003 c4 11M.D. Cantine
Very good. I like the titles of the poems a lot... veery good.
Thanks for reviewing my poem.
Very awesomely awesome... and now I have a suggestion for you... how about a poem, like this one, only about a day? Like a poem about the rising of the sun, the midday, etc. I think you'd do it well.
11M.D. CantineVery good. I like the titles of the poems a lot... veery good.
Thanks for reviewing my poem.
Very awesomely awesome... and now I have a suggestion for you... how about a poem, like this one, only about a day? Like a poem about the rising of the sun, the midday, etc. I think you'd do it well.
9/2/2003 c1 4Thrift Whore
Wow, this is a great poem. I love the feeling I get from it.. Most've the poems I've read have been dark and rather depressing.. This is a very nice change. Keep it up. :)
4Thrift WhoreWow, this is a great poem. I love the feeling I get from it.. Most've the poems I've read have been dark and rather depressing.. This is a very nice change. Keep it up. :)