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4/27/2006 c8 Jstar888

There were a few mistakes such as mixing up names, but all and all very good. Update soon plz.

P.S. Hope your enjoying FL
1/9/2006 c2 2Viera Wing
Sorry I had to stop now, but both chapters have been very intriguing so far. There's just the error of you using 'your' instead of 'you're'. Otherwise, well written. I'll continue the rest soon.
12/29/2005 c1 15Bianca3000
incredible! I loved it!You are a great writer.Keep writing! :)
5/15/2005 c6 1Nerdette
Aw...I'm already addicted to the story! Please update.
5/7/2005 c6 40Daletiel
I've got to say, that was a great chapter. After such a long wait between chapters, you gave me a hell of a read. The plot is thickening nicely, and I'm enjoying both Valen's and Myanya's character development. Rork seems to be an intriguing character as well. I can't wait to see what happens, both for when Myanya reaches Galone and when Valen realizes that Rork has betrayed him. Keep up the good work! *flashes thumbs up*
3/19/2005 c5 ash211
Oh, I adore this story and your writing is wonderful. I completely look forward to updates :)
2/28/2005 c5 Daletiel

sorry it took a little while to review. I've been busy. I'd have to agree the chapter was a little short, but after all this time, I'm glad to see some progress in the story. I'm liking how it's developing. I'll talk to you more about it later. Take care.
6/6/2004 c2 2W3DNESDAY
wow...another great chapter
Valen and Anya are awesome names. I'll give you some actual constructive criticism later, when i have the time..but ah! so good!
a long chapter to make up for the short prologue? =)
i can't wait to see what happens.. i love death and destruction! and angst! angst too!
6/6/2004 c1 W3DNESDAY
I was totally drawn in by your summary, and so far i'm not disappointed! the first chapter, despite being so short, was great..makes me wanna read more!
8/19/2003 c3 Regina
Well, here you go. Some of that lovely response we authors so adore. This is a FANTASTIC STORY! You have Anya's character done wonderfully! She's tough but without getting absolutly annoying. The prince, her borther, her servant, all well done. Their different character traits and the wa they all interact allows us to understand them all better. I will definatly continue reading this!
7/3/2003 c2 5Mia Serene
AAck, death and destruction? Never fn, that. Well nevermind. Interesting beginning to an intriguing story. I do believe you've made me hate Valen faster than any author's made me hate a jerk before,so kudos on that. Anya is an interesting character, and I'm looking forward to see how her life unfolds. All in all, good stuff. Can't wait for more :)
7/3/2003 c2 40Daletiel
You've set up an interesting premise for your story. I'm a fan of your fanfic "Broken", and I can see that this story should be just as good, if not better. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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