for Waking2/22/2006 c5 Lady Silver fang
Wow! Great story so far (grins) though I haven't finished it. It was wonderful keep up the good work.
Wow! Great story so far (grins) though I haven't finished it. It was wonderful keep up the good work.
3/24/2004 c9 Funsmoke
I love the chemistry between the characters. Very very interesting piece of writing.
I love the chemistry between the characters. Very very interesting piece of writing.
3/24/2004 c5 Funsmoke
I'm really starting to warm up to this story. There are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, but everyone does that. I like the way the plot is very easy and meanders nicely.
I'm really starting to warm up to this story. There are a few grammatical and spelling mistakes, but everyone does that. I like the way the plot is very easy and meanders nicely.
11/9/2003 c37 Peachez-Baby
Hm.. So sorry it took me this long to get to this. I've heard oh so much about you and your amazing writing. When Lynz first told me about this, I thought she exaggerated your talent. *chuckles* Well, I can say, she didn't in the least. You're great! Amazing. You'll be hearing from me more often, but tonight hun, I'm falling alseep. -_-;; 2 am will do that... and I have an really extensive day tomorrow. Keep up the great work.
Hm.. So sorry it took me this long to get to this. I've heard oh so much about you and your amazing writing. When Lynz first told me about this, I thought she exaggerated your talent. *chuckles* Well, I can say, she didn't in the least. You're great! Amazing. You'll be hearing from me more often, but tonight hun, I'm falling alseep. -_-;; 2 am will do that... and I have an really extensive day tomorrow. Keep up the great work.
8/15/2003 c37 Storyshadow
I'm back! lol, Loved this story, you should write more ones with these charactor's! I love them! More I say, MORE! -giggles- sorry, got into the sugar again...
I'm back! lol, Loved this story, you should write more ones with these charactor's! I love them! More I say, MORE! -giggles- sorry, got into the sugar again...
8/15/2003 c31 Storyshadow
Hi, its me again...um, great chapters(from the last reveiw to this one) loved the fight scene ^^...um thats it.
Hi, its me again...um, great chapters(from the last reveiw to this one) loved the fight scene ^^...um thats it.
8/14/2003 c6 Storymakertolazytosignin
Wow, like all your other story's I've read(which is most of the ones involving Elwyn and co.) This is great. Some minor err's, but over all, its a good start so far. Now off to read some more o it!
Wow, like all your other story's I've read(which is most of the ones involving Elwyn and co.) This is great. Some minor err's, but over all, its a good start so far. Now off to read some more o it!
8/1/2003 c37 
3Josee Poesee
NO! It cant be over yet! I dont want it to be! *sniffles* MAke sure you get the sequel up SOON! VERY SOON! =O)
*~* Dy *~*
3Josee PoeseeNO! It cant be over yet! I dont want it to be! *sniffles* MAke sure you get the sequel up SOON! VERY SOON! =O)
*~* Dy *~*
7/31/2003 c37 know all see all do all
All I can say is I hope you write another story with richard and you made some errors on spelling other than that
great story.
All I can say is I hope you write another story with richard and you made some errors on spelling other than that
great story.
7/31/2003 c37 37Peachez 24
Great story! I love it. About clearing up anything... nope, you're awesome at describing and giving background information people need. As for characters... I think maybe Nyoki would be a pretty cool person to elaborate on a little. We know a bit about her, but not really much. Although that did seem to work for the story. Hm... nevermind. This was a great story. Keep writing!
Peachez ^_~
37Peachez 24Great story! I love it. About clearing up anything... nope, you're awesome at describing and giving background information people need. As for characters... I think maybe Nyoki would be a pretty cool person to elaborate on a little. We know a bit about her, but not really much. Although that did seem to work for the story. Hm... nevermind. This was a great story. Keep writing!
Peachez ^_~
7/31/2003 c35 Peahez 24
Too lazy to sign in... You should be proud. But not just for this chapter, the whole thing. ^-^ How long was he gone from home? Wasn't it um, three days? Oh nevermind. I have a mind like a siv. Yeah his house and clothes seemed to have picked up the look of blood stained. He's not having the easiest time. Well keep writing and update soon!
Peachez ^_~
Too lazy to sign in... You should be proud. But not just for this chapter, the whole thing. ^-^ How long was he gone from home? Wasn't it um, three days? Oh nevermind. I have a mind like a siv. Yeah his house and clothes seemed to have picked up the look of blood stained. He's not having the easiest time. Well keep writing and update soon!
Peachez ^_~
7/31/2003 c35 3Josee Poesee
lol poor Richard... and that was pleasent! very surprising! lol
*~* Dy *~*
3Josee Poeseelol poor Richard... and that was pleasent! very surprising! lol
*~* Dy *~*
7/30/2003 c34 Josee Poesee
O yay he lives! yay Yay YAY! lol awesome AWSOME! and I'm so glad you updated agin so soon =O)
*~* Dy *~*
O yay he lives! yay Yay YAY! lol awesome AWSOME! and I'm so glad you updated agin so soon =O)
*~* Dy *~*