for Dr Luke Martin7/6/2003 c1 TamarF
Wow. That's all I have to say. Wow. That... was... wow... But how did the ppl not hear them? I don't understand. Still.. wow. I'm speechless. And that's no small feat! Good job.
Wow. That's all I have to say. Wow. That... was... wow... But how did the ppl not hear them? I don't understand. Still.. wow. I'm speechless. And that's no small feat! Good job.
6/29/2003 c1 someone
it's really good. keep writing! im waiting for the next chapter!
it's really good. keep writing! im waiting for the next chapter!
6/24/2003 c1 Guest
you have to finish this story... it was so good, turning me on and everything, you cant stop there! WRITE MORE PLZ!
you have to finish this story... it was so good, turning me on and everything, you cant stop there! WRITE MORE PLZ!
6/23/2003 c1 JINX
nice story conitnue please
nice story conitnue please
6/23/2003 c1 
2Katie Fieldon
I liked it. A lot. It got me slightly excited ;) Write some more like this!
2Katie FieldonI liked it. A lot. It got me slightly excited ;) Write some more like this!
6/23/2003 c1 Schizuoko
are u female by any chance? most of these kinda stories are written by 'em it seems..though i read the story not realising at first it was "erotica", quite amusing.
are u female by any chance? most of these kinda stories are written by 'em it seems..though i read the story not realising at first it was "erotica", quite amusing.
6/23/2003 c1 A Reader
definitely continue this! it's really good, i'd like to see where it goes from there
definitely continue this! it's really good, i'd like to see where it goes from there